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Published: 2011-10-17 04:26:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Scream now because at the end of the day,
That is all that you've got.
You will make the mighty militia pay,
For their wicked and twisted plot.

Your voice shall dance through the air,
Ringing like a thousand church bells
And will follow them wherever they dare
Try to hide away from the bittersweet knells.

Through the gnarly trees they shall stumble,
Thickets of brambles shall slash at their forms.
Away from civilization they will tumble
But your voice will continue to condemn social norms.

So here is your chance:
Scream.
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Comments: 2

RobertJamesA [2011-10-17 05:00:11 +0000 UTC]

I like the last stanza the most it sends a powerful message, good job.

Check out my period piece if you want to. [link]

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DinoSayyRawr In reply to RobertJamesA [2011-10-18 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you. And I really like your piece, as well. The fact that it takes place somewhere not as cliche as Paris or whatnot is really nice. Plus, Warsaw's winter really gives the scene and the emotions their biting character. It's shows the contrast between that night to the speaker and the world surrounding.

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