RobertJamesA [2011-10-17 05:00:11 +0000 UTC]
I like the last stanza the most it sends a powerful message, good job.
Check out my period piece if you want to. [link]
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DinoSayyRawr In reply to RobertJamesA [2011-10-18 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you. And I really like your piece, as well. The fact that it takes place somewhere not as cliche as Paris or whatnot is really nice. Plus, Warsaw's winter really gives the scene and the emotions their biting character. It's shows the contrast between that night to the speaker and the world surrounding.
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