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ZahlenO [2016-10-13 17:03:05 +0000 UTC]
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Few words can capture the essence of this, and I can't think of them. Now, I don't know what kind of impact you were going for, but the best word that comes to my mind is "brooding." I don't really see any flaws to point out about it, but nothing really jumps out at me at the same time.
I love this picture, do not mistake me, but there's nothing here that really makes me go "HOLY F*** THAT'S AWESOME." It's simple, but there's nothing wrong with being simple. The kind of pose the character adopts and the foreboding shadow behind him is a standard pose for many characters, and there's nothing wrong with that, and the amount of details you put into the background and character make it more than just a copy: it's an enhancement.
Now, I don't know what kind of appeal you were going for, and the best word i can think of for this picture is brooding. If you were going for something more like "domineering," "powerful," or "imposing," it falls short. But I don't know what you're going for so I can't fault you for that. I think if you had gone for that kind of approach, it would have had a greater impact on the viewer, but that's just my opinion.
Nice touch with the Reaper Grimm: keeping it simple with only the skull and his hands shown and a robe to cover his body leaves more to the viewer to imagine what is there and creates a more personal connection with the photo to those that enjoy this picture. Comments on the OC are irrelevant to the critique except for details and feeling exhibited by character, but that would be more accurate if an understanding of the character was had.
Overall, I love the picture: there's nothing here that makes me want to jump out of my seat, but it's a great picture. I think if you had the Reaper Grimm be imposing and threatening rather than a passive and preparatory stance, there would have been a bit more impact.
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victortky [2016-10-14 06:52:58 +0000 UTC]
OMG The Reaper Grimm is terrifying! I love the detailed face design and the cloaked details.
I also love the detail of the blade as well as the Huntsmen design, and the colours was pretty good!
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ArtbroJohn [2016-10-14 05:58:30 +0000 UTC]
Very cool!
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SirMandokarla [2016-10-14 03:47:07 +0000 UTC]
So... how much does a commission cost?
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dishwasher1910 In reply to SirMandokarla [2016-10-14 06:19:13 +0000 UTC]
on average 30 pounds or more , you can see the price chart in my journal section
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SirMandokarla In reply to dishwasher1910 [2016-10-18 18:35:14 +0000 UTC]
Alright. I've taken a good long look at the price chart and the art you've done before, and I'm wondering: are all commissions meant to be RWBY-related? Is it mandatory, or just what you enjoy and therefore have the most inspiration for? What are your feelings on drawing OCs or characters from other franchises? What about combining characters from franchises? I've seen your RWBY-Halo stuff (which is gorgeous), but would you have ever considered an art piece in which Ruby met the Master Chief? Hypothetically, I mean.
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Rosenkruex [2016-10-14 03:22:01 +0000 UTC]
WOOOOOOOOO! Love it, love every bit of it! Thanks again dude, you rock!
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Shadowspeare [2016-10-14 02:45:56 +0000 UTC]
Looks badass!
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TSellickInferno [2016-10-14 00:27:42 +0000 UTC]
Sorta reminds me of Guts to an extent.
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TSellickInferno In reply to Shadowspeare [2016-10-14 22:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Would make it even more topical if his left hand was actually fake.
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TSellickInferno In reply to BladeSmith55 [2016-10-14 22:43:21 +0000 UTC]
"Sounds like your RWBY could use a little bit more Forces in its diet."
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TSellickInferno In reply to BladeSmith55 [2016-10-15 20:12:50 +0000 UTC]
Then they're gonna need RWBY's equivalent to the song "Murder" lol.
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thegreatcow [2016-10-13 19:50:32 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful work. You capture the sheer sinister tone of the entire piece with just a few characters. Keep up the phenomenal work.
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SibArtsmen [2016-10-13 18:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Ok screw it. I need to finish designing one of my OC's because I need something this awesome drawn of him. I already know what I want him to be, I just haven't drawn him myself yet. Or at least come up with a finished design.
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Misticwolfarts [2016-10-13 18:20:18 +0000 UTC]
you are an amazing artist!
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Pokespecshipper [2016-10-13 15:14:31 +0000 UTC]
DIE... DIE .. DIE!!!!!
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ViperiumPrime [2016-10-13 15:04:15 +0000 UTC]
my critique: FAKIN EPIC
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animeak116 [2016-10-13 13:33:09 +0000 UTC]
I wish I had money
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FantasyRebirth96 [2016-10-13 13:31:32 +0000 UTC]
very nice work doing this! ah man keep it up alright?
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rjosh2019 [2016-10-13 13:30:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow!!!
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