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Dissidia012 — The Promised Land: Ch20
Published: 2012-02-24 11:47:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1376; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description Hi everyone following this story!
Please remember this is a WIP. There are details in this chapter that may change as the story progresses, mainly about the materia

Emotive scenes in this - may be confronting to some readers! I hope you keep reading after this. haha!!

THANKYOU for all your support! I like to think Im writing this for you as well as myself

Any feedback is appreciated! That would be awesome!!!
Thankyou for reading!!


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Comments: 5

Rimma911 [2012-02-24 20:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Another amazing chapter.. your writing is soo amazing and pro!! Gosh its so detailed and very emotional.. you get the characters spot on!
The Meteria is very clever they all carry it Loved that!!
This chap was tender, really nice to see Denzel and Cloud bond like this, real father and son moment.. awww it was sooo emotional <3

Can't wait to read the next chap!!!! Oh dear hope Tifa's okay! Wondering what's hapnin with Marlene too.

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Dissidia012 In reply to Rimma911 [2012-02-25 02:38:59 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!!
aww pro! haaha. that's nice.
I've been writing along time now and Ive worked on other stories. I've got a story I'm revising and when it's done I will try to get it published. Writing fanfiction is great practice for me.

this is one of my favourite chapters!! very moving. great opportunity for emotion.

trying to work our magic and materia is a pain in the butt! there's not much information about it in the canon sources. I had to create my own method on how the materia fits into weapons and objects. It's even harder when you try to put magic into combat. so much to figure out.


Tifa you will see her soon.

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Rimma911 In reply to Dissidia012 [2012-02-25 15:50:07 +0000 UTC]

OH my really?! Thats so amzing!! I think your fics should be bublished too, there really amazing and i just know they will sell, I will deffo be a big fan and a regular customer n_n

Yeahh i agree, it is really showing the readers how Cloud is thinking also the other characters too.. It isn't rushed nor is it trying to cover loads of topics, its simple and i love how its so long, don't want it to end!!!

Yeahh i know what you mean.. its really cool and it's belivable it works like this too. When you put this in use its so long and you have to write it so the reader will understand how its working, boy thats a head ache >.<

Awwww i miss her, and dying to know whats happeing to her!!can't wait to read onnn

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Dissidia012 In reply to Rimma911 [2012-02-26 13:29:27 +0000 UTC]

hahaa LOong!! yeah, I just wish I was reading this and not writing it.
Im posting these fairly quickly because I've wrote them a while ago, but now its taking me about a fortnight to write a chapter.

writing a deep POV is all I can do. And Cloud is quite easy to do now, because I've been in his head for awhile, so you get to know a 'character' haahah its the other characters that are hard. There will be scenes along the way with other characters.


I wish fanfics could be published!! that would be awesome. I would buy so many ahaha



Tifa. soon. soon. but not next. *spoiler* her scenes will eventually get a little dreamy


thankyou!

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Rimma911 In reply to Dissidia012 [2012-02-26 17:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Awww it is really cool being on the other end just reading the finished piece.
Did you write them before and typing them now then posting them? Its great that your not going with it cause that would take FOREVER!! Aww takes a while to get each chapter finished to perfection.. But you know its a great job done all that time is sure worth it <3

Aww yeah you have written allot of fics with him staring in it.. but you get him spot on... Aww thats cool getting to know the other characters will be awsme!!

Yeahhh!! Mee too!! I would totally buy yours.. you know after you write the final chapter to thhis fic, i will be sure to print out all of it and bind it into a book.. make a title page with your name printed on it and add it to my awsme book collection

Ohh it keeps poping into my mind cause all this time what could they be doing to her??!! But its good were on edge to know on whats to come.

Aww your welcome n_n I just really enjoy your writing.. and this one fic sure is worth the wait

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