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DissolutionSoul — Blind Fate of Affliction

Published: 2005-05-17 16:38:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1026; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 130
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Description Feeling the tears stream down her face..
Making sure to remember how each one tastes...

All she wanted was to be loved..
A kiss here or there; even just a hug..

But that is something that shall never come to pass...
For Love and Happiness is something she'll forever lack...

Her heart had been so blind to her fate..
That now here she lays; tears staining her cheek..

Never again shall she be so blind..
Her soul staying hidden for the rest of time...

Forever more, shall her heart remain a blind seam..
Locked away forever, in the Darkness of Eternity..

Never forgeting how the pain in each tear tastes..
No longer blind, as the Affliction of Truth streams down her face....
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Comments: 50

syco-bird-boy86 [2005-07-17 21:52:23 +0000 UTC]

uh huh

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DissolutionSoul In reply to syco-bird-boy86 [2005-07-18 02:41:05 +0000 UTC]

M'hm.

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syco-bird-boy86 [2005-07-17 05:06:02 +0000 UTC]

U NO IT!!!

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DissolutionSoul In reply to syco-bird-boy86 [2005-07-17 08:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Yep. ^.^

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syco-bird-boy86 [2005-07-16 14:20:03 +0000 UTC]

sssssshhhhhhhhhwwwwwwwwwoooooooooowwwwww www!!!!

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DissolutionSoul In reply to syco-bird-boy86 [2005-07-17 02:19:55 +0000 UTC]

O.o Hyper little thing, aren't you? ^.^

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lizard168 [2005-07-10 03:11:24 +0000 UTC]

it's so sad, so beautiful.....

dam u're amazing at this!

i am so watching n faving this!

you are

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DissolutionSoul In reply to lizard168 [2005-07-10 03:52:57 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't say I'm amazing. But, I'm glad that you like it.

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lizard168 In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-07-11 02:09:30 +0000 UTC]

^_^

you are a good poet though

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DissolutionSoul In reply to lizard168 [2005-07-12 04:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. ^.^

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lizard168 In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-07-12 13:30:03 +0000 UTC]

np ^_^

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chobit-chii [2005-07-08 20:40:20 +0000 UTC]

i think i seen this before..........................or maybe its just me....anyway love the pic!!!

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DissolutionSoul In reply to chobit-chii [2005-07-09 04:06:01 +0000 UTC]

If you are talking about the poem... Than no, that is mine, and mine alone. As for the picture. I did a disclaimer that is was not mine. You should read the thing above to see that....

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shikoshi [2005-06-09 04:08:10 +0000 UTC]

i love the wings!very emotional,explains the feeling.

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DissolutionSoul In reply to shikoshi [2005-06-09 05:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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shikoshi In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-06-13 01:13:28 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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bakasanx [2005-06-09 02:38:50 +0000 UTC]

im srry about how u felt but i hope u feel better now and just incase u arent here is a ^~^beautiful poem and pic

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DissolutionSoul In reply to bakasanx [2005-06-09 04:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Aww.. Thank you. Yeah, I'm feeling much better now, and I'm glad you liked the poem..

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bakasanx In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-06-10 12:50:40 +0000 UTC]

np ^~^ im glad u r feelin better

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DissolutionSoul In reply to bakasanx [2005-06-10 19:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you..

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bakasanx In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-06-10 22:58:45 +0000 UTC]

np ^~^

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Egweene [2005-05-30 19:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Very emotional, it really gets to your heart...Great job

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DissolutionSoul In reply to Egweene [2005-05-31 03:58:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.. I'm glad you liked it.

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Egweene In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-05-31 17:08:06 +0000 UTC]

always a pleasure...

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DissolutionSoul In reply to Egweene [2005-06-01 04:12:53 +0000 UTC]

M'hm..

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whiterobedmage [2005-05-21 16:04:40 +0000 UTC]

The beauty in that picture is beyond words. Inspiring, sublime, and such wouldn't do it much justice if you had not seen it.

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DissolutionSoul In reply to whiterobedmage [2005-05-21 19:33:12 +0000 UTC]

I wanted a picture that would go to the poem itself. Or, atleast as close as I could get it. An, I really love that picture. So, that is the one I used. It is very beautiful..

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DeathsSuicide [2005-05-21 05:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful Kit. I can definately relate to this. Yet another favorite added to my collection of work from such a beautiful mind.

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DissolutionSoul In reply to DeathsSuicide [2005-05-21 19:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is the first time someone has every called my mind something like that. O.o Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. ^.^

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DeathsSuicide In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-05-21 19:56:32 +0000 UTC]

You do have a beautiful mind, and a beautiful person to top it.

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DeathsSuicide In reply to DeathsSuicide [2005-05-23 00:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Your welcome. Anytime you need to talk or just goof off, i'm here.

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DissolutionSoul In reply to DeathsSuicide [2005-05-21 20:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Awww. Thank you! That was so sweet of someone to say. I really needed that right now. Thank you. ^.^

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deathrose9 [2005-05-19 19:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Great job. Very emotionaland honest.

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DissolutionSoul In reply to deathrose9 [2005-05-20 02:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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nlghtm4re [2005-05-17 20:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Very nice

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DissolutionSoul In reply to nlghtm4re [2005-05-17 20:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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JudgedWrongly [2005-05-17 20:18:04 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful, Kit...

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DissolutionSoul In reply to JudgedWrongly [2005-05-17 20:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you..

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0neMoreTyme [2005-05-17 19:35:09 +0000 UTC]

powerful, and the picture complements the words very much.

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DissolutionSoul In reply to 0neMoreTyme [2005-05-17 20:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.. Yeah, I was going for a picture that would add to the feel of it.

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DissolutionSoul In reply to 0neMoreTyme [2005-05-17 20:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.. Yeah, I was going for a picture that would add to the feel of it.

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froszen-fox [2005-05-17 18:51:17 +0000 UTC]

beutifull poem, i hope you feel better soon

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DissolutionSoul In reply to froszen-fox [2005-05-17 20:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you..

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Kawaii-Ash [2005-05-17 17:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow... really prettyful! I like it! Really nice

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DissolutionSoul In reply to Kawaii-Ash [2005-05-17 18:29:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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ErBungle [2005-05-17 16:41:33 +0000 UTC]

i dont like the anime but this design is incredible i love it

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DissolutionSoul In reply to ErBungle [2005-05-17 16:51:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you..

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ErBungle In reply to DissolutionSoul [2005-05-17 16:51:45 +0000 UTC]

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bananafire [2005-05-17 16:41:08 +0000 UTC]

This picture is truly beautiful with emotion. I like the colouring

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DissolutionSoul In reply to bananafire [2005-05-17 16:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I like it too.

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