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divinehatred — Sing with me
Published: 2005-04-16 10:05:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 224; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 8
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Description She sings of dreams, in me
Open the side of the sea
And nothings ever felt so good, before
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When will this current change time?
While my life slips on by
The reasons seem to fade
And all I've know dissipates
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These dreams of you are all I see
Scattered through the thoughts to be
Broken, lost, confused and alone
When does it all unfold?
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Here is where the beauty lies
Sick, tormented and broken minds
Open the skin and say goodbye
All the tears run from these eyes
You were my first and I never forgot
All the pain that your love has brought
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Thin inked lines scratch the blank
Making this emptiness seem too fake
When she sings I fall asleep
Bringing back the memories
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Here is where the beauty lies
Sick, tormented and broken minds
Open the skin and say goodbye
All the tears run from these eyes
You were my first and I never forgot
All the pain that your love has brought
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Comments: 22

hybrid-tauren [2005-05-08 10:19:43 +0000 UTC]

DEATH!!!!! mmm yes and bananas

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Anti-------Christ [2005-05-02 23:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh....very long. Eyes hurt. Hmm, I wish I could write like that....I write all about death and weird things....meh.

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divinehatred In reply to Anti-------Christ [2005-05-03 06:49:49 +0000 UTC]

I have a lot of songs with Death and Hate... I have more of hate than I do love song.

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munson [2005-04-18 16:02:33 +0000 UTC]

I love this one too!! You are a really good poet!!! Another Favorite!!

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divinehatred In reply to munson [2005-04-19 07:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I have a lot of more poems if you'd like to read them just search through my gallery...
Thanks again for the favorites i'm glad you liked them. ;D

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munson In reply to divinehatred [2005-04-19 11:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just didn't have a lot of time... I will check out a lot more of them in the near future!

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pixiehead [2005-04-17 23:26:27 +0000 UTC]

These dreams of you are all I see
Scattered through the thoughts to be
Broken, lost, confused and alone
When does it all unfold?



it unfolds here..lol

j/p

beautiful....im faving it!

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divinehatred In reply to pixiehead [2005-04-18 06:47:59 +0000 UTC]

Heh.. thanks!!

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nuahaion [2005-04-17 12:01:18 +0000 UTC]

good one chief!---a poetic-commando-navajo brave...right?--hehe

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divinehatred In reply to nuahaion [2005-04-18 06:47:31 +0000 UTC]

haha... yesss!

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nooneimportant [2005-04-17 04:15:55 +0000 UTC]

oh wow that's so pretty! i can't wait to hear it one day!

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divinehatred In reply to nooneimportant [2005-04-17 06:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.. me either!

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agirlnamedcatz [2005-04-16 20:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Excellent prose!

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divinehatred In reply to agirlnamedcatz [2005-04-17 06:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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loaded [2005-04-16 16:10:05 +0000 UTC]

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divinehatred In reply to loaded [2005-04-17 06:45:45 +0000 UTC]

yesss!

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purefuckinghatred [2005-04-16 15:50:25 +0000 UTC]

i love this! good job

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divinehatred In reply to purefuckinghatred [2005-04-17 06:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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DrEaM26 [2005-04-16 13:35:14 +0000 UTC]

yeah thats pretty tight.. !

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divinehatred In reply to DrEaM26 [2005-04-16 13:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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haiswon [2005-04-16 11:17:50 +0000 UTC]

oh steven...

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divinehatred In reply to haiswon [2005-04-16 11:59:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks bro

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