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Published: 2010-03-27 21:51:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2440; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 5
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Description For the first chapter of my upcoming fan fiction, "Unconditional Love."

Kevin's mom sees him for the first time in four years. Kevin doesn't quite know how to handle it. You'll understand it better when I publish chapter one. It's a little rougher than my last drawing. I had a bit of a twinge in my drawing hand.
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ETNRL4L [2012-02-18 18:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh God! You're killing me with these!

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thecoolest2010 [2010-08-18 19:07:05 +0000 UTC]

awwwww

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DivineROAR In reply to thecoolest2010 [2010-08-19 23:08:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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BloodWolfGurl [2010-03-29 23:13:44 +0000 UTC]

AWWW! That's so freaking cute! I want to read your fic do you have it published yet?

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DivineROAR In reply to BloodWolfGurl [2010-03-30 00:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Only got chapter 1 done. I write really slow and on top of it I'm wrting my second Ben 10/Kingdom Hearts crossover.

[link]

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BloodWolfGurl In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-30 00:15:29 +0000 UTC]

I read it! Its amazing!! I can't wait for the second chapter

Ben 10/Kingdom Hearts?? Wow, interesting combo

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DivineROAR In reply to BloodWolfGurl [2010-03-30 00:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Lots of people like it. It works pretty well.

Sora = Ben

Kairi = Gwen

Riku = Kevin

the first story is called Trinitas Unlimitared
The second is The Infin Knight Quest

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BloodWolfGurl In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-30 00:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Wait, hold on, unless I'm getting my sources mixed, aren't Sora and Kairi supposed to have thing for each other? I don't see how that would work unless of course you completely disregard that and just go with them being friends

Sounds interesting though!

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DivineROAR In reply to BloodWolfGurl [2010-03-30 12:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Well I meant that last bit in a friend relationship with similar traits. Not meant to imply anything else
Ben and Sora are both the heroes with the all powerful weapon who have to save the world/ universe from being destroyed. Gwen and Kairi are the princesses each in there own way blessed with pureness and great hearts. Kevin and Riku have the dark pasts trying to be better persons. They only real difference is Kairi is with Sora and Gwen is with Kevin. Riku actually has a crush on Gwen but knows her heart is bonded to Kevin.

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BloodWolfGurl In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-30 17:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh I see, okay

So you're keeping the original characters in there or something? Nevermind, I think I'm misunderstanding what you're trying to explain

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alienforce20 [2010-03-29 02:09:27 +0000 UTC]

That's a really great moment

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DivineROAR In reply to alienforce20 [2010-03-29 12:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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alienforce20 In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-29 13:22:27 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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sweetie-1121 [2010-03-28 20:51:47 +0000 UTC]

I love the drawing.
&& can't wait for the first chapter

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DivineROAR In reply to sweetie-1121 [2010-03-28 21:53:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to post a rough draft of chapter one soon. I might go back and tweak it here and there if i think I've guessed or made up something wrong.

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sweetie-1121 In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-28 21:55:05 +0000 UTC]

Ti all good. take ur time, no need to rush...

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DivineROAR In reply to sweetie-1121 [2010-03-28 21:57:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying too but I want to post something.

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sweetie-1121 In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-28 22:01:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm the same way. Sometimes I just want to post something and just skip the whole step of proofreading and going over it.

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DivineROAR In reply to sweetie-1121 [2010-03-28 22:19:29 +0000 UTC]

I have a proofreader but she is slower than me. I go back and repair the story after I post them.

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sweetie-1121 In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-28 22:22:27 +0000 UTC]

thats exactly what I tell myself I'll do later on after they are posted. But sadly i don't. I get sorta lazy.

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4eknight11 [2010-03-28 02:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's a great moment
I like Kevin's expression in this picture.

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DivineROAR In reply to 4eknight11 [2010-03-28 17:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much!

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AncientWonder [2010-03-28 00:40:59 +0000 UTC]

awwww your starting the story at the first time kevin come home but i though kev had been gone for more then 4 years but that soo sweet ive got to read it when you get it done up

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DivineROAR In reply to AncientWonder [2010-03-28 00:56:33 +0000 UTC]

I was guessing. I tended to think he comes back around the end of Summer at the age of 15 close to turning 16 just months before meeting Ben and gwen again. I am starting the story in New York with them having to move back to Bellwood. I want to use NYC since I know the place so well.

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AncientWonder In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-28 19:03:28 +0000 UTC]

ok now it make sense i ushally think that kev ranaway when he was 8 -9 year old or somthing and that he never saw his mom till after darkstar rising because what kind of mom lets there kid go around stealing and being the broker of the forever knights she must have been soo oblivious to what kev was doing if he returned before that

so kevin and his mom are living in ny when kev is 16 or when kevin is 11

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DivineROAR In reply to AncientWonder [2010-03-28 19:10:43 +0000 UTC]

You'll see. I should have chapter one ready sometime this week.

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AncientWonder In reply to DivineROAR [2010-03-28 19:29:17 +0000 UTC]

ok all wait and see

sweet thanks

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