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SLPPegasister [2018-10-06 04:19:37 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, they look good.
By the way, I updated my chapter from what you said.
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DivineSpiritual In reply to SLPPegasister [2018-10-06 12:45:02 +0000 UTC]
That is a little better. I just think it's always better to keep in mind of how the characters would act or say in their given roles instead of just saying the same lines. Like I can imagine Hiro acting formal during the wedding rehearsal because he doesn't want to make a bad impression but after he runs off, he talks normally since there's no one there to judge him. Just something to keep in mind.
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SLPPegasister In reply to DivineSpiritual [2018-10-06 13:32:39 +0000 UTC]
*snaps fingers* Drat.
Yeah, I'm don't know much about weddings.
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FDairyAnime [2018-10-06 02:47:37 +0000 UTC]
Awww.
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Dragonfire92379 [2018-10-06 01:54:38 +0000 UTC]
Hope you do Ciro in their centaur/mermaid and bird forms. They look pretty cute in their former wear.
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