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Description Previous instalment: Calvina's retribution Extra 01: The Goddess
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No water version: Calvina's retribution 03alt-The illmouthed brawler

It had been a while since Calvina declared her intentions on driving Coco, the self-proclaimed goddess, mad by licking the soles of her feet until the skin turned wrinkly. She had been lapping at those beautiful feet that still tried to move away with the same insistence from the beginning. Calvina’s tongue was starting to get dry.
“Erin, my dear” Said the cruel torturer to her, from her point of view, friend and protégée “Go find an open store and bring me this” She gave a piece of paper to the blond girl who took it with unsure hands.
“What do you want this for?” She asked raising an eyebrow “And where do I get it at this hour?” She had a reason to say that, it was already late in the night.
“You’ll figure out something” Said the woman winking an eye and went back to diligently lick the girl’s feet, who laughed in protest in the ground.
“Now that she left” Said Calvina lighting a cigarette “I have some questions I want to ask you…” She looked at her prisoner with inquisitive eyes.
“Anything you want! But please don’t lick my feet anymore!” Said Coco as soon as she caught her breath back.
Calvina let out a cloud of white smoke.
“Sure, I won’t do that again. Now, answer me this” Her eyes glared at the captive, who rested uneasy when she noticed that her captor’s hands were dangerously close to her sensitive feet. “What do you know about a girl called Angel” Something in Calvina’s eyes made Coco shiver. From those eyes, she could infer that the woman would not accept a negative answer.
But Coco was not very lucky herself.
“I don’t know much about her…” She paused, her eyes open wide when Calvina started to glide her fingers around her arches, wet from the woman’s saliva “Ahahahaha, noooo! You promised you wouldn’t tickle me anymorehehehehehe!!” Cried the girl desperately.
“You are wrong on that” Said Calvina giving a deep breath to her cigarette “I only promised not to lick your feet. But this I can do” She gave her an evil smirk “And I will do it as long as you don’t give me the answers I’m looking for”.

“AHAHAHA, I’M TELLING YOU!!! I DOHOHOHON’T KNOW ANYTHING ELSE!” Coco was blind from her own tears that filled her eyes. Her stomach hurt from all the tickling Calvina had caused on her poor feet for a tortuous half an hour.
“So, let me get this straight” Said Calvina “You were attacked by her…That’s the only thing you know?”  Calvina frowned “That’s not enough” But Coco was in the verge of hysterics “I’ll let you catch your breath, you better make that little head of yours work “ She did not stop touching those feet, she simply slid her nails, slowly from the toes to the heels, in a teasing motion that made the girl giggle while she tried to gasp for air.
“I…hihi…” Said Coco, she could not endure more of that. She had to think fast. Then she had a revelation “I know something…ihihihi…when she tickled mehehe…there were some links in the ‘more section’…Ahahahaha!!!!” Calvina did not like that statement.
“Leave the crazy talk aside” She said in a cold voice.
“Buhuhuht it’s true…I saw more pictures about her, and I discovered something!”

“Calvina, I’m back” Said Erin.
“Oh, I didn’t hear you coming” Replied the woman “How come you move so quietly?”
“It’s something I learn in my job. I try not to be noisy so I won’t disturb my employees!” Said the blonde, puffing her chest with pride “Anyway, what a time you chose to make me do your chores!” Complained the girl while handing a bag.
“Oh thanks!” Said Calvina, accepting it with glee.
“Please…” Said Coco “Can I go now?” She really sound pitiful, to a degree that Erin looked at her with compassionate eyes and was thinking about saying something in her favour when the auburn-haired woman spoke back.
“Thanks for everything Erin” She looked at her in the eyes “Enjoy the rest of your holidays, because I need to prepare a few things alone. I’ll contact you when I need your help again, Ok?” Said Calvina with a big smile, that made Erin unsure of whether to look forward to that or not “Eh?” Said suddenly Calvina “Didn’t they have dark?” She was holding a jar of milked chocolate cream. Erin only went back home and said.
“At this hour? Be thankful that I could find that” And she left the park.
“Please...please...I don’t know anything else...but I could help you have your revenge. She also tickled me! We could ally and work together!” Coco did her best to convince Calvina.
“That won’t do, didn’t you hear? I’m doing this alone” With no effort she opened the jar and put some of its content over Coco’s milky soles.
“What are you doing?” Asked the girl, trembling upon the contact from the sticky substance.
“Isn’t it obvious? All this interrogation has made me hungry” Said Calvina with an evil smile, Coco’s eyes went wide open with fear.
“But you said you wouldn’t lick my feet again!” Cried Coco desperately.
“But I’m not doing that, just cleaning your dirty feet...with my tongue” And she indulged herself in the chocolate’s sweet flavour. While Coco only let an inhuman ticklish howl out.
"Oh, and while we are at it" She added "I will ask you a few more questions about more girls I have on my sights, let's start with..."

That was two months ago. Clearly it was more time than Calvina would have wanted, but they say revenge is a dish that is best served cold. And she had preparations to make. She still did not have enough information about her target, a ‘cat-girl’ called Angel. But she would soon find a trusty source of data: she had a girlfriend that Calvina knew pretty well. In fact that was the reason she was being so careful in her plans.

Jack gave an annoyed look to the person who was blocking her path.
“I remember you” Said the spunky woman “You are that psychotic bitch that tickled the crap out of me!” A lot of enmity was heard in her voice.
“I’m glad to see that you remember me” Said Calvina waving a hand. She jumped back in the last second to avoid a straight punch from Jack “And I’m also happy to see you haven’t lost that bad temper and mouth of yours”
“Screw you, asshole! I’m not letting you weirdo tickle me again, you stinky piece of shit!” She punched again, which Calvina avoided, and hit a concrete wall that turned in to dust.
“About that...” Said Calvina as she evaded another strike “I wanted to apologize, you know?”
Jack was so dumb folded that she stood in place looking at Calvina with empty eyes.
“The fuck did you just said?”
“That I wanted to apologize. It wasn’t my idea to do that to you. Is there any way I can repay you?” Offered Calvina earnestly.

“Hmmm, I can’t believe how good you are at this. For fuck’s sake this is...hmmm!” Said a happy brawler, whose feet were being skilfully rubbed by the expert hands of Calvina.
“I’m glad you like it. Please be sure to relax” Said the woman, who was surprised about how soft and tender were Jack’s soles, considering the girl’s roughness and promptness to fight.
“Sure thing redhead” She said purring softly “You know, I thought you were just another crazy butt-head, but I was wrong. This massage is blowing my fucking head off!”
“And you haven’t seen anything!” Calvina took a bottle and emptied its content in her hands “With this lotion your feet will be more sensitive. Let me show you” With dedication, she caressed all the surface of the feet over her lap. Making them shine with the substance. Jack was already stiff, from the pleasure “Enjoying already? But I haven’t started yet!” Calvina stroked Jack’s now slippery arches and the girl let out a loud moan. Her toes sprawled, rigid from the sensations.

Some minutes later, Jack’s eyes felt heavier, the massage was getting more and more pleasure, possibly because her feet’s sensitivity was increasing. Was there any limit to that? Jack did not mind “Everything can just piss-off as long as I can enjoy this for a little more...” Jack’s eyelids closed completely.
Nevertheless, Calvina did not stop massaging those feet. Even after she could hear Jack’s deep breath, who had fallen in slumber, she still touched those feet caringly “They are not sensitive enough”.

“Hmm, when did I fell asleep?” Jack opened her eyes. She was in a very good mood from the massage, in fact her feet still tingled and were even more sensitive than before. But her mood turned into a 180 degrees turn when she noticed her situation.
“What the [CUACK]? Where the [CUACK] I am? Where the [CUACK] are my [CUACK] clothes? AND WHERE DOES THAT [CUAAAAAAAAAAACK] COME FROM!” Shouted the angry girl who was only wearing a swimsuit that she did not remember putting on.
“Wake up already? Cool, time to get to work” Said Calvina, holding Jack’s feet on her lap. The fighter looked around with anger to see that her arms were above her head, her wrists chained to a crane and her ankles were also chained to something behind Calvina that she could not see. The two of them were seating on a platform near a big thing that was covered in cloth.  But she could not study her surrounding for much more, she felt something peculiar in the soles of her feet.
“The [CUACK] are you doing?!” Shouted Jack in anger.
“So you did feel it?” Said Calvina with interest. She glided all of her fingers on the almost naked girl’s soles. Which moved involuntarily “Does this tickle?” Jack wriggled uneasy in her seat.
“[CUACK] no! It’s [CUACK] annoying, I’m not even ticklish there, how the [CUACK] did you manage to make me feel something?”
“You were sleeping for a good one hour. And I’ve been massaging these two since then...” She attacked the heels and did not get an out of the ordinary reaction “So I figure they turned at least a little bit sensitive” Calvina looked with great attention all of Jack’s  movement “So how do you feel about this?”
“It’s [CUACK] weird” Replied Jack who was getting more angry by the second “I feel like I’m about to form a smile, but I’m not [CUACK] ticklish on my feet. [CUACK]! Stop touching me!” She closed her eyes “And what the [CUACK] is that [CUACK], which is always [CUACK] interrupting me?!!!”
Calvina shrugged her shoulders.
“We might as well go to the real thing. Calvina got up, searched for a device on her pocket and pushed a series of buttons. The crane activated and had Jack hanging in the air.
“Put me down you [CUACK]!!!” Said the girl kicking the air. Calvina ignored her and pulled the cloth to reveal a tank full of water and fishes, Jack went pale when she saw it.
“You can’t be [CUACK] serious!” But Calvina ignored her.
“See the rubber ducky?” She pointed to a yellow toy floating in the water “I modified it myself, with a speaker, every time you say a curse it will activate. I don’t think I need to make a demonstration”
“Like [CUACK] you have! What about those [CUACK] fishes?!”
“There is something I want to tell you, but I don’t think you will give me the information I need so easily, so I figured I might motivate you to do so” Said Calvina making the crane go down. Jack used all of her might to stay out of the water. She could see the fishes gathering on the surface.
“Fine you [CUACK] piece of [CUACK], ask me the question but don’t you [CUACK] dare to put me inside that tank!!” Menaced Jack, but Calvina had other plans in mind.
“After all the trouble I had to build all of this just for you. Oh no, you are going to enjoy this spa treatment, like it or not” She then moved aside to reveal a pair of 100 kg steel weights that were chained to Jack’s ankles. The auburn-haired woman pushed them in the water, where they fell with great force, dragging Jack down, who had half of her body submerged in the water.
“Ahahahahahaha!!!! These [CUACK] are [CUACK] tickling meheheheh!!!!” She tried to move around but the fishes were biting at her legs. Making her hysterical when they went for the back of her knees. The feet were not so bad, but thanks to Calvina, she could actually feel something when the tiny mouths bite them, and she did not like it in the least.

Little by little, Calvina, made the crane pull Jack down, making more of her tender body available to the fishes that nibbled at her skin with such gusto, making her laugh in pure hysteria. When they got her bellybutton the girl completely lost it. Above her, on the platform, Calvina spoke.
“Okay, time for some questions. Angel” She said with a serious expression.
“What the [CUACK]  ahahahahahaha is wrong with her? Nohohohohoho, not there not [CUACK]  thehehehehehehere!!!!!”
“I’ve got a debt with her, tell me anything you know about your girlfriend” She pushed the button, making Jack breast go below the water level. Her soft armpits near the hungry fishes, but still not at their reach.
“I’m not [CUACK] BETRAYING HER [CUACK] YOU [CUACK] AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, I CAN’T TAKE THIS!!!!!” Shout Jack back.
“Of course you can take it. Because I’m going to show you your real limit” With this mysterious prediction, Calvina removed her clothing until she only had her own grey swimsuit. With care she went to the water tank herself, laughing as soon as the fishes went for her, starting on her feet.
“Ahahahahaha! I can’t believe these fellows are so good! This hahahahas to be horrible for you!” Said Calvina with admiration.
“[CUACK]  you, you [CUACK]. How can you get into this voluntarily?! Ahahahahaha!!!” Screamed Jack in return.
“I don’t mind a bit of tickling, and speaking of which. I’d better go for your real weak spot if I want you to speak anytime soon” She put a hand behind Jack’s back and started stroking her right underarm “I haven’t forgotten how ticklishhihihihi your armpits are” Said Calvina smiling, but it was not clear if it was because of the tickling the fishes were inflicting on her or because of her threat.
The place soon was filled with two voices laughing aloud. On the one hand, Calvina, almost enjoying the situation and, on the other, Jack crying with agony as not even one part of her body was left unattended. But it was also filled with the noises from the duck, which would not turn off from the later's continuous swearing.

After a really long hyatus I present you the next part of Calvina's retribution. Due to Cocricor1 birthday present to me I got to make Angel's turn go earlier that I had planned, but first Calvina needs to take care of her girlfriend Jack, someone she has already met before.
All the events mentioned are:
-Coco tickled by Angel Hahahappy Birthday
-Angel tickling Calvina DivBirthday
-Calvina tickling Jack Broken Justice

Fun facts:
-I had the idea for Calvina making Jack's feet a bit sensittive from a really long time, even before I started this project.
-The duck was a silly idea by superownageduck who said it would be funny to include it a a means of censorshi. To be honest that's easier than to having to come up with original curses and swearing.
-I mostly used Jack drawing made by as references for her anatomy.
-Drawing this many fishes was a bore!
-If you feel like the girls' skin looks diferent in terms of colour it's because I found an old pen in my house, one of those that you get just for attendind a learnign convention that is not even made by any known brand that adds the perfect tone to the one I already use.

Calvina and Erin are copyrighted by me.
Coco is copyrighted by
Angel is copyrighted by 
Jack is copyrighted by
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Comments: 72

DivJustice In reply to ??? [2018-05-22 18:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Some times a good laugh is the best to chill down a bit

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MrBannanaMan In reply to DivJustice [2018-05-22 18:39:17 +0000 UTC]

ahaha i agree but only if i make other girls laugh by tickling them

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ThatDuckinMonkeyXD [2014-12-28 01:52:05 +0000 UTC]

you know i did come back to this piece just to say your story telling is pretty well done...  i forgot to mention in a comic that the massage portion did bring in a little bit of asmr which makes me wonder if you'd actually do some massage pieces soon

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DivJustice In reply to ThatDuckinMonkeyXD [2014-12-28 15:51:11 +0000 UTC]

They are not really my main focus, although I don't dislike them. With this I mean that I got not many plans related to those in a near future.
Anyway thanks for the compliment.
PS: If you like stories which involve massage overall (not necessarily to Jack) check the last Bleach story I did as there are a few scenes about it.

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ThatDuckinMonkeyXD In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-31 00:00:41 +0000 UTC]

i'll give it a look see

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DivJustice In reply to ThatDuckinMonkeyXD [2014-12-31 00:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Beware, there is also a bit of /M, commissioner's request XD

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RaymanGirl6 [2014-12-10 02:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Si me estaba siendo cumplía así, me gustaría perderlo porque yo soy cosquillas

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DivJustice In reply to RaymanGirl6 [2014-12-10 12:33:03 +0000 UTC]

You used a translator, didn't you? I can tell because what you said here literally means "If I was being accomplished like that, I would like to lose it because I am tickle".
I appreciate the effort, but you can talk to me in English, I understand it just fine. I take that what you really meant is that you could not stand this if you were in her place because you are very ticklish, don't you? Well, there is only one way to know for sure XD
Thanks for the comment

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RaymanGirl6 In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-10 21:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes

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sasori1100 [2014-12-02 08:58:27 +0000 UTC]

cada ves Calvina esta mas y mas cerca de toparse con Angel y cuando lo haga........... bueno veremos que pasa XD

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DivJustice In reply to sasori1100 [2014-12-02 15:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Pues sí, pues sí.

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sasori1100 In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-04 22:29:12 +0000 UTC]

hehehe ok

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AnimeSage8 [2014-12-01 20:29:01 +0000 UTC]

So Jackie was Calvina's next target and point in that direction by dA's Deadpool, oh man I've missed this series a lot ^^
Awesome work man, loved love the story and had a few laughs with it too, the increased sensitivity to her feet was quite the creative touch as was the tickling via fish XD
All in all this I'd say that this piece is [CAUCK]ing superb, fantastic job my friend   

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DivJustice In reply to AnimeSage8 [2014-12-01 22:31:09 +0000 UTC]

You liked it so much that you wrote love two times in a row XD
I really appreciate this comment, I also wanted to continue with this series for a long time.

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AnimeSage8 In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 23:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Whoops, thanks for pointing that out there, bit embarrassing but I honestly do like it that much so... yeah ^^
Not a problem man, I eagerly await the next installment (I've got a rough idea of who it could be )

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DivJustice In reply to AnimeSage8 [2014-12-01 23:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh trust me, you don't and I'm not kidding XD

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AnimeSage8 In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 23:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, well then I don't, guess I'll have to wait and see then XD

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TickleMaster187 [2014-12-01 17:08:16 +0000 UTC]

She should've asked Coco about Kira,since they're friends.
More 4th-Wall-breaking! YES!

The censorship is hilarious and the idea on how to tickle Jack is awesome.
Cool story too.

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DivJustice In reply to TickleMaster187 [2014-12-01 22:31:54 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know that detail, but hey, I will simply make a light modification XD
Thanks for the compliments.

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TickleMaster187 In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 23:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Well,I know you just want to make Angel's part quickly,I'm just saying from a story-standpoint it would've been smarter to ask Coco about Kira. XD
No problem.

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DivJustice In reply to TickleMaster187 [2014-12-01 23:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh, but I changed that, look :“But I’m not doing that, just cleaning your dirty feet...with my tongue” And she indulged herself in the chocolate’s sweet flavour. While Coco only let an inhuman ticklish howl out.
"Oh, and while we are at it" She added "I will ask you a few more questions about more girls I have on my sights, let's start with..."

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TickleMaster187 In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 23:19:17 +0000 UTC]

That'll do.

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epluribusunumdeusex [2014-12-01 12:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful 

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DivJustice In reply to epluribusunumdeusex [2014-12-01 12:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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epluribusunumdeusex In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 12:50:13 +0000 UTC]

You are Welcome

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ThatDuckinMonkeyXD [2014-12-01 10:23:29 +0000 UTC]

it seems that when jack breaks out she's going to have to teach Calvina the hard way...  which is clearly the exact opposite of the easy way..  which does not include the medium way..  

judging by jack's hairstyle this has to be an older time giving me a chance to draw out a bit of a time skip sequel with jack getting back at calvina for tormenting her this way  trust me although calvina may like tickling..  she will not like the consequences jack will set up

aside from that real nice piece calvina better watch out that jack doesn't get a chance to turn into a mermaid..  her tail is ironically a helluva lot stronger than her own strength  thanks again for this

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DivJustice In reply to ThatDuckinMonkeyXD [2014-12-01 12:18:33 +0000 UTC]

So many ways...
Have you change Jack's hairstyle recently? I haven't noticed.
Anyway, don't be misunderstood, it's not like Calvina likes to be tickled, she simply doesn't mind, but she has her limits though.
You are not the first one to mention about the mermaid form, which I completelly forgot when I did this piece XD
I'm glad you liked this

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ThatDuckinMonkeyXD In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 12:21:19 +0000 UTC]

it basically depends on jack's moods

jack on a good day, messy emo-ish styled hair...  with horns on her red hair "she doesn't comb her hair the emo look is natural on her xD"

Jack on a bad day, hair spiked back and ready to beat the shit out of someone

Inverted hair color- jack has a migraine and will not tolerate anyone's bullshit xD

as for calvina..  jack can re-create a certain accident that happened to her "though is curable now" that not many people would like

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DivJustice In reply to ThatDuckinMonkeyXD [2014-12-01 12:33:25 +0000 UTC]

I didn't quite get the last part.

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ThatDuckinMonkeyXD In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 13:02:49 +0000 UTC]

It's noth lethal, but it annoys most ocs

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DivJustice In reply to ThatDuckinMonkeyXD [2014-12-01 13:14:25 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll let you surprise me.

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DarkShaquille [2014-12-01 10:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Not sure how to react to this.
one way, FINALLY! Someone to put 's Angel in her place!
But it's not nice of Calvina to break Angel's girlfriend! Cruel

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DivJustice In reply to DarkShaquille [2014-12-01 12:03:25 +0000 UTC]

Angel has made Calvina real mad, and when angered she is not someone to mess around with XD

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DarkShaquille In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 16:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Isn't that how everyone is?

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DivJustice In reply to DarkShaquille [2014-12-01 22:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Some more than others  

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lupusthered [2014-12-01 06:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait too see hove every one gets her back.

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DivJustice In reply to lupusthered [2014-12-01 12:02:45 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what you are talking about

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lupusthered In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 16:21:07 +0000 UTC]

There no way her victims aren't going too want revenge.

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DivJustice In reply to lupusthered [2014-12-01 22:29:58 +0000 UTC]

Again, I don't know what you are talking about

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lupusthered In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-02 04:25:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm looking forward too seeing all the people Calvina has tickled in the name of retribution to get there revenge.

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DivJustice In reply to lupusthered [2014-12-02 13:02:52 +0000 UTC]

I was just messing with you XD

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lupusthered In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-02 18:57:59 +0000 UTC]

I knew you were, but I didn't see anything wrong with playing along.

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Skogsjones [2014-12-01 06:03:50 +0000 UTC]

I see the similaries you talked about ^^, so it was the fish that tickles that were the similarity xD
that would have been my second guess xD
well anyway good/nice pic ^^
are 100kg really necassary for keep Jack there? XD

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DivJustice In reply to Skogsjones [2014-12-01 12:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Of course they are, she is stupidly strong you know! XD
And thanks for the compliment.

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Skogsjones In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 18:42:28 +0000 UTC]

I see, well I know she´s a fighter xD..and so on second thought well 100kg is not that much in term for some manga or cartoon or OC´s directly xD
^^

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DivJustice In reply to Skogsjones [2014-12-01 22:27:51 +0000 UTC]

You said enough, sometimes it's better not to think about details too much least you want to spoil the fun XD

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Skogsjones In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-02 11:40:18 +0000 UTC]

ok, yeah xD

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master417 [2014-12-01 01:36:20 +0000 UTC]

tengo que admitir que realmente amo que continues las historias del dibujo pasado XD digo volvi a sentir la misma emocion que cuando lei la historia de coco por primera vez y pues eso no es algo facil de lograr( o eso supongo yo XP) me gustan mucho tus historias XD y fijate que me parece curioso como jack no se transformo en sirena considerando que estaba en el agua o quizas no podia? XP, tambien me agrado esa personalidad de calvina de hacer sentir confiada a sus victimas antes de divertirse con ellas XD (creo que se ha vuelto un oc muy bueno en mi opinion),  y pues los cuacks son algo divertido de leer XD, la imagen esta muy bien la verdad no tengo mucho que decir, otro gran trabajo xD

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DivJustice In reply to master417 [2014-12-01 12:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Últimamente has estado poco activo, pero me alegra verte de vuelta.
Muchas gracias por los cumplidos, producir emociones en los lectores nunca es fácil y que me digas que lo he conseguido me alaga mucho, ya que podría hacer las historias separadas y quitarme problemas de en medio, porque así tengo menos cosas en cuenta. Pero entonces ¿Dónde estaría la gracia?
Sobre lo de la sirena, pues se me había olvidado completamente cuando idee todo esto XD. Así que, yo que sé, a lo mejor si está atada no se puede transformar bien...Tampoco es que importe mucho.
Y de nuevo gracias por los cumplidos. Intentaré mantener el nivel.

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master417 In reply to DivJustice [2014-12-01 22:43:32 +0000 UTC]

pues digamos que no eh tenido el tiempo que eh querido para dibujar XP pero al menos conservo los animos y muchas ideas XD supongo que eso cuenta algo no? y pues tu eres genial haciendo historias, aunque me da pereza a veces leer historias, yo se cuando comienzo a leer algo tuyo que obtendree algo bueno, entretenido y genial :3 ademas eres muy creativo  (cosa que lo demuestras con tus ocs XD )

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