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DiziInsomniac — .Truth.

Published: 2005-06-24 18:10:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 9
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.an eclipse.
of who i was
up on the light
.
of who i am
shadowing the wisdom;a spawn of insecurity
rendering myself;immortal;
i cease,
.to be.
.
.
reliving the past presenting
herself in a veil of masked irritability
obscuring my past
defense
immensely
.so sickingly.
turning the face
a turning key
in a keyhole unlocking
an iron door
.
.
opening a casket lined in betrayl
disloyalty glistening on the skin
of mahogany wood
encasing the death of a truth
.betrayed.
faced with the dark glow
-a beam of angel dust-
upon the skin of deciet
.
a tastebud of years
a rose
adored by her fears
((thorns))
.
piercing repeated mistakes
.a lifetime.
.to retrace.
under scaled karmic flaw
unbalanced  imperfected and separated
unto whirlwinds of chaotic
clouds
.
.  
.
a film in
black and white
flashing upon the screen
.
an unerasable memory
a dream
.storms unto thorns.
thrust
into hands of open arms
up on the air of the moon
.simply floating by.
evoking fatal irony
through this
.
love lived lie
.
across a universe of inconceivable
longing
she crosses the lettering
upon the stars
-.searching.-
for an ultimate sunbeam
of truth
to melt away the bittersweet feeling
encasing her soul
her one true calling
.
through
winds of suffocating belief
.
she continues falling
.
.
bleeding into a muted
melodic song
.
'love.is.never.wrong...'
.
awaiting the dark velvet night
for an unveiling
through the risky fight
-a lover-
-a best friend-
.
to call her own
.a.home.
a voice
in a whisper
colliding with the very
blood in the veins
flowing
through the pain
like rivers. a waterfall
.an inlet.
to the sea
a universe
.a lover's sanctuary.
.
.
quietly encountering
a soft velvet kiss
replacing the vacancy of her starving lips
.
.
upon a dream
.
that someday her path
shall be green
dancing in dew drops
.petals.
of flowers
.finally woken.
conceiving the truth
.finally spoken.
and heard
.
and tasted
.
touched upon
.
echoing a melody
.
'love is never wrong...'
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Comments: 13

relativelytarnished [2005-10-29 06:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Speachless.

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LondonExpress [2005-08-15 14:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Beutiful Poem!!

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roseredtears [2005-07-06 07:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!! I love it!

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Sorano-Hime [2005-06-25 14:32:49 +0000 UTC]

I think this is a very sweet flowing poem. This was my favorite part of the poem.

across a universe of inconceivable
longing
she crosses the lettering
upon the stars
-.searching.-
for an ultimate sunbeam
of truth
to melt away the bittersweet feeling
encasing her soul
her one true calling

Keep up the great work!

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DiziInsomniac In reply to Sorano-Hime [2005-06-25 15:30:00 +0000 UTC]

T h a n k s, I'm really happy you like it.

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Demastes [2005-06-24 23:55:52 +0000 UTC]

I like how you did the periods in between each thing, looks like water dripping down the page, beautiful! I love this poem! This is definitely a favorite!

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DiziInsomniac In reply to Demastes [2005-06-25 15:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanxx, this means alot to meh!

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DrunkCheerleader [2005-06-24 20:06:39 +0000 UTC]

YOU SUCK AT WRITING POEMS.

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DiziInsomniac In reply to DrunkCheerleader [2005-06-25 15:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot

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lucki-fae [2005-06-24 18:15:52 +0000 UTC]

beautiful writting. and i love the preview image.

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DiziInsomniac In reply to lucki-fae [2005-06-25 15:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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sweetxdeath [2005-06-24 18:15:23 +0000 UTC]

That is amazing. Great job!

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DiziInsomniac In reply to sweetxdeath [2005-06-25 15:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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