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DizzyPacce — Recognition

Published: 2011-05-13 03:07:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1119; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 52
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Description Trixie sat in a booth of the inn/tavern, listening to the storm.  She felt undressed without her cape and hat, but Ponyville was the one place she didn't want recognition.

"I'm going to need a room and a bottle of your best," Trixie said to the nearest waiter.

Not long after getting her bottle, Trixie felt a hoof tap her on the side.  Trixie turned to see a purple earth pony looking at her with bleary eyes and standing on unsteady hooves.  'Clearly,' Trixie thought to herself, 'she's a popular customer here.'

"You're the Great and Powerful Trixie," she accused with a slur.

"Why," Trixie sighed, "you a fan?"

"Your magic show scared my kid," she slammed her hooves on the table as she spoke.  "All that lightning and fireworks, you could have started a fire.  And then you brought an Ursa to town."

Trixie placed a hoof on the pony's chest.  "If you're gonna accuse somepony of something, you might want to get your facts straight first.  It was those two dolts Slugs and Scissors who brought that stupid bear into your stupid town.  So why don't you sit down before you fall down," she finished with a light shove.

The earth pony went hurtling back, knocking over a nearby table.  Before Trixie could even say anything, three earth ponies were escorting her to the door.

"But I barely touched her," Trixie protested.  "At least let me grab my-," she turned her head to see the purple earth pony smiling triumphantly back at her as she caressed Trixie's bottle of wine.  The pony grabbed the bottle with her mouth and tipped her head back.  Seconds later, she spat the empty bottle to the floor before staggering away.

Trixie's mouth was still hanging open as she was pushed out the door and into the rain.  "I really hate this town."
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Comments: 20

NicLove [2012-10-22 20:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Umm... her name is "(Berry-Push)" ! not Rush.

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dancinninjac [2011-05-13 20:23:48 +0000 UTC]

SO EVIL!

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DizzyPacce In reply to dancinninjac [2011-05-13 20:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes a pony gets thirsty.

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Pimpslap-MeGee [2011-05-13 05:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Wait, why did she...?

Poor trixie.

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DizzyPacce In reply to Pimpslap-MeGee [2011-05-13 05:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes, Berry runs outta cash and needs to get her drinks by less kind methods.

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Pimpslap-MeGee In reply to DizzyPacce [2011-05-13 05:30:49 +0000 UTC]

I think you'll find this hilarious:
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DizzyPacce In reply to Pimpslap-MeGee [2011-05-13 05:35:33 +0000 UTC]

HAH!
That's lucky.

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Pimpslap-MeGee In reply to DizzyPacce [2011-05-13 05:38:59 +0000 UTC]

So Berry Punch as a cheapskate?

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Garnot [2011-05-13 03:45:52 +0000 UTC]

And that is why Trixie deserves all our love and recognition. "Rapping Trixie; no respect!"

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DizzyPacce In reply to Garnot [2011-05-13 03:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Were the story to continue she'd be taken in by Derpy for the night in exchange for a magic show.

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Garnot In reply to DizzyPacce [2011-05-13 03:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Why don't you expand it? I'm expanding "Black Sun" into a three parter.

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DizzyPacce In reply to Garnot [2011-05-13 04:02:21 +0000 UTC]

I might...
But it really wouldn't go anywhere, just more hijinks.

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Garnot In reply to DizzyPacce [2011-05-13 05:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Go for it. Make it funny, make it sad, but above all, make it meaningful.

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Solum-Ipsum [2011-05-13 03:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahaha. Nice one. Nice one, but undoubtedly cruel story, brony.

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KatalusTalrius [2011-05-13 03:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Berry Rush...is that the Overly Protective Parent Pony?

And great story! Never been a big fan of Trixie, myself, but that hardly hindered my enjoyment.

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DizzyPacce In reply to KatalusTalrius [2011-05-13 03:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's her.

I like writing Trixie, but it was hard to squeeze such a large personality as hers into 300ish words.

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KatalusTalrius In reply to DizzyPacce [2011-05-13 03:36:56 +0000 UTC]

I figured.

With Trixie, it's kind of one of those situations where I see why everypony else seems to like her so much, but that doesn't mean I do. And I get the 300 words thing, it would be pretty hard to display that bloated ego of hers in so little time.

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Lawn-Pygmy [2011-05-13 03:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Trixie gets no respect, I tells ya. :rodneydangerfield:

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DizzyPacce In reply to Lawn-Pygmy [2011-05-13 03:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Were the story to continue she'd be taken in by Derpy for the night in exchange for a magic show.

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Lawn-Pygmy In reply to DizzyPacce [2011-05-13 06:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Derpy is obviously the best pony. Such a big heart. And Dinky would be all over her, bugging the poor unicorn to show her more magic tricks. Trixie, utterly charmed by the little filly, would be unable to refuse.

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