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Published: 2009-10-13 23:20:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 4203; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 48
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Description "The old king had run far beyond the reaches of his kingdom. for what seemed like eternity this powerful, majestic predator had found himself to become the hunted. for months he had evaded his persuer. flashes of his pride's massacre rushing through his mind.... torturing him every inch of the way.
The moist heavy air put pressure on his already strained lungs, as he stumbled forward. he can hear the celebrating howls of the enemy.

memories...

memories of his children playing carefree.... both taunts and comforts him.....

"HOOOWWWWLLLLLLLL!!!!"

He can hear the rushed running of the ravenous beast.... making its way to the old ruler.

He had fought many wars, won many battles. fathered many children, loved his queen more than a million suiters ever could have.....

and this is it.

he stumbled some more. over run by exhaustion.

he hasnt eaten in days. nor drank. barley could sleep.

he has come to the end of his long life's road.

"Snarl......"

he looked up into the distance as he sees his foe rise up just behind a tree on the neighbooring hill.

the creature glares at him, frozen, ready to make its move.

the king looks down at the flowers in the grass. like the ones his kin used to play in, and and even him, as a child used to lay about in. hearing stories from his father of a monster more fierce that the mightiest of lions. more fowl than the dirtiest of hyena. more loud than the angriest of elephant. more terrifying than any dreams you could conjure up.....

"grrrrroooowwwwllllll......"

the monster inches forward....ready to take its prize.

The old King knows....he cannot win this battle.

a light shines down through the fog.

he is cold

he can hear the singing of his little children....the warm inviting voice of his beloved queen.

........time to die


"ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRR SNARL GWAR *SNAP* *RUSH* "AAAARAHHHH-ah-h-hhh-~~~* *echoess.........*
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Comments: 31

DragonHeartLuver [2010-06-02 18:44:55 +0000 UTC]

who is this in the picture ???

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DJ88 In reply to DragonHeartLuver [2010-06-07 09:18:18 +0000 UTC]

just a random lion and a werewolf creature

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DragonHeartLuver In reply to DJ88 [2010-06-07 17:05:18 +0000 UTC]

o ok then i was wondering ^^

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Scarla-MCR [2009-11-15 18:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Scary D: And sad...but very beautiful. Not only do you have a talent w. drawing, but writing as well!

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DJ88 In reply to Scarla-MCR [2009-11-16 13:32:00 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you 8D

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uekisan [2009-10-19 15:22:20 +0000 UTC]

YOu always Make everyone Happy with your love art

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DJ88 In reply to uekisan [2009-10-20 01:16:06 +0000 UTC]

lol

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uekisan In reply to DJ88 [2009-10-20 01:54:36 +0000 UTC]

x3

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uekisan In reply to uekisan [2009-10-19 15:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Lovey ***

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AJ-BlazingFreedom [2009-10-14 16:46:19 +0000 UTC]

reminds me little of how I ended a story of mine, with the main character dying but as he fell to his death thinking of the happiest point in his life and then hearing his already dead beloved calling to him.

very beautiful, both in art and your little clip of literature there

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DJ88 In reply to AJ-BlazingFreedom [2009-10-17 08:48:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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melted-gummy-bears [2009-10-14 10:21:17 +0000 UTC]

So is the beast supposed to be any particular real animal? Great job by the way just beautiful, your description is great

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DJ88 In reply to melted-gummy-bears [2009-10-14 15:18:32 +0000 UTC]

were wolf type i suppose.

and thank ya XD

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melted-gummy-bears In reply to DJ88 [2009-10-15 02:49:21 +0000 UTC]

O ok lol kewl & ur welcome

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KashimusPrime [2009-10-14 02:37:47 +0000 UTC]

You should dabble in writing more oftem

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DJ88 In reply to KashimusPrime [2009-10-14 15:18:01 +0000 UTC]

lol i knew someone was gonna bring that up XDD i don't write much anymore. i guess it wouldn't hurt to start up again XD

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KashimusPrime In reply to DJ88 [2009-10-14 16:22:08 +0000 UTC]

You should try atleast this story oozes with awesome :>

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DJ88 In reply to KashimusPrime [2009-10-19 00:10:34 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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EvilCopepod [2009-10-14 02:28:48 +0000 UTC]

This is sad... but very beautiful.

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DJ88 In reply to EvilCopepod [2009-10-14 15:17:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ thats what i keep getting told

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EvilCopepod In reply to DJ88 [2009-10-15 00:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Which must mean something...
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Senrade [2009-10-14 00:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. I love this. It is depressing, but I love how you described his last moments, and how he reflects on it. Amazing job Dj! Kudos to you

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DJ88 In reply to Senrade [2009-10-14 15:17:01 +0000 UTC]

yayness thank you XD

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Kumlay [2009-10-13 23:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. so beautiful, but depressing. But amazing job ..

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DJ88 In reply to Kumlay [2009-10-13 23:36:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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eddyslilsis [2009-10-13 23:34:49 +0000 UTC]

soooo sad...but still awesome! I love how at the end hes finally at peace when he hears his loved ones.

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DJ88 In reply to eddyslilsis [2009-10-13 23:35:56 +0000 UTC]

^^ aw thank you.
yes, soo many people try way too hard to be overly violent with these type of things. he has a horrible/happy ending.

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eddyslilsis In reply to DJ88 [2009-10-13 23:37:52 +0000 UTC]

That's what makes sad stories bareable. The thought of finally returning to those you've lost and being happy forever after. ^^

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DJ88 In reply to eddyslilsis [2009-10-13 23:43:40 +0000 UTC]

^^

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MarissaTyoyo [2009-10-13 23:24:08 +0000 UTC]

wow lovely and depressing at the same time.. love it!

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DJ88 In reply to MarissaTyoyo [2009-10-13 23:27:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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