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gontovaan [2011-05-31 01:00:22 +0000 UTC]

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So hot!
8 pack abs, chest fur, lol and me raising my shirt over my head for a sexy look.
those utility pants are awesome! got a pillow and sitting in a relaxing chair with my tie on my pants undone

the sly look on my face and my eyes and eyebrows seem to say, "come.. lets have some fun together" or "I'm ready whenever you are"

It's perfectly awesome in every way thinkable. My mind pretty much almost exploded when I saw this posted in my watch list.
All in all.. it's very awesome, I love it, you did an awesome job. (100 word minimum for a critique.. lame.. that's why no one fills them out.. )

*huggles, kisses, and lickings*

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Taru5naru5 [2011-07-02 04:48:56 +0000 UTC]

Can i Open my package now (looks at Gonto's pants)

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Zeno11 [2011-07-01 01:58:18 +0000 UTC]

This could definitely use some work, but other than that, it's sexy and seductive.

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Wolfmean [2011-05-31 21:08:08 +0000 UTC]

nice!! ^^
very hot

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Liketheisland [2011-05-31 16:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Not bad. You've got the canine facial anatomy down from what I can tell, and I like how the design of the chair echoes the shapes of those abs. The way the seam of his right pant leg lays across the folds was a nice touch, as well.

However, I feel like your human anatomy could use some work. For starters, I think the size of each arm is fine, but the deltoid of the right arm should be on top of the shoulder, not stemming from the chest. Also, based on the size of the pecs, I feel like the nipples would be more oval-shaped, especially since the raised left arm should cause part of the corresponding pec to rise up with it. It looks like you drew the serratus under the chest instead of under the armpit, and the lower torso feels a bit flat (probably due to the fact that the abs don't curve around the trunk's horizontal contours). So yeah, those are the things that instantly jump out at me.

A few smaller issues here: in the picture's fullview size, the lines look really grainy for some reason (low-res scan, perhaps?). I also would have avoided cutting off the character at the knees and right elbow. You might want to try a full-body shot next time. Finally, some things about the clothing are kinda confusing; for instance, the shirt looks like a towel because it doesn't curve around his right side, and I'm wondering why he's hanging bacon strips from his fly.

Soo just some stuff to keep in mind next time. Other than that, the pose and facial expression really fit the mood you were going for here, and the proportions of the body in general look pretty solid.

Hope this helps!!

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InterJim126 [2011-05-31 11:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Hubba Hubba!

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Scottvisnjic [2011-05-31 05:19:18 +0000 UTC]

OMG. It's really hot

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Lobazul [2011-05-31 02:57:25 +0000 UTC]

nice drawing, i love the expression in his face.. very good

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gontovaan [2011-05-31 00:22:09 +0000 UTC]

O_O

OMG this... was a complete surprise ........................

instant fav!

... I LOVE IT <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

*hugs and licks and kisses you*

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