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Djiloa — -Sky Melody-
Published: 2010-05-15 17:44:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1558; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 26
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'Dear Alex,It's been a while since we saw each other, right ? How are you doing ? Did you manage to get used to your university ? As for me, I'm still writing music, I want to be a singer so much ! You know, the more I'm writing, and the more I can see myself singing, and I'm sure that one day, I'll be able to sing for all the people of this world ! I hope my songs, as well as your draws, will one day our works will go through the sky and move people hearts, I'm sure that day'll come, one day, for sure, so please go for it ! I'm doing my best too !
Lots of love,
Your Melody'
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Her name's Melody, she loves to write songs, and her boyfriend, or rather the guy she has a crush on loves drawing ^^
This is and entry for contest
The chosen words are
Sky : her would-be self is flying in the sky hence the background
Love : she's writting a letter to her boyfriend with her fav song and she really loves writing music (hence her grinning face and blush
)Sound : She loves writing music, and can see her would-be self singing her songs (hence the singing character and the music score)
Dream : She can see her would-be self, which is also the dream she's trying to reach (hence the singing character and the stylish clouds, because it's a dream)
Inspiration : As she write, she can see herself sing, and as she see herself sing, she want to write more, in other words, her dream is making her go forward and inspiring her songs (and maybe her boyfriend is a little too ? ^^) hence the score that comes out of her singing self (and the littles notes on it
)Joy : Writing music is something she really loves, and when she begans, she can't stop (hence all the music scores she wrote)
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FEEDBACK/COMMENT/CRITICISM PLEASE !! ^^
I can't believe that took me more than 50-60 hours ! But I did learn a lot
I can't see where I did mistakes or what I should improve anymore, after staying 5 whole days on it, please help me improve ! 
Tool : Paint tool SAI and photoshop for the sky (clouds not included)
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Comments: 33
This is a really interesting picture, I love the outfit the floating girl is wearing.
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Thank youuu~~
I have some anatomy probs though ^^"
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I'll give you some crits of general order
First of all,this is a pretty drawingX3 I really like how well you expressed the happiness within the characters and everything.I also like the neat colors you used to make the whole work.
The problems I see,though,is mostly related to the anatomy,specially of the flying girl.Her belly part is way too straight,since the woman body has more curves,and she almost doesn't have hips,which gives a very strange feeling.Also,the upper part of her clothes doesn't have any folds,unlike the bottom(aka the rainbow-ish skirt). Also their clothing and skin in general needs some deeper shades.
The other girl's anatomy is fine as I can see.
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congrats
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Yeah I'm no good at anatomy ^^"
Thank you very much for the critique, I'll try to fix that ^^
I like drawing happy people ^^
oh and about the anatomy, CLAMP's girls don't have many curves too, do them ? Oh anyway I'll try to fix it ^^
waow that's a good critique, I guess you're pretty used to it Thank you very much ^^
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I know the feeling,I ain't either
Aww np dear<3
Me too!
uuuhhh...I don't know
lol,np again!And no,I'm not used to critiques,but I suggest DD's very often so I can easily set the strong and weak points of an artwork.Matter of practice
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Really ? how many DD do you suggest a day ?
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depends...when it's a day specially for this,20-40
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O_O Waow ! and how many are accepted ? and who do you sent a note to ? the same admin ?
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[link]
FAQ #18: Who selects the Daily Deviation and how is it chosen? <-go there and see who are the guys which gets the galleries
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okayyy~~ thank youu ^^
You should make a tutorial, you know so many things about it ^^
do you ever suggest more than one artwork from the same artist in one day if you can't chose between artworks ? ^^"
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welcome
haha,don't need to,there's already some awesome tutorials out there
Nope,I don't.
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I see ^^ I'll start spamming admins too then !
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yay do it!
Welcome!Glad I could help
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No problem ^.^
i like your originality *^*
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really ? Thank you ^^
hummm what's so original about my pic though ?
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Beautiful!
I love the colorful dress, the music notes, the feeling of the draw, all!
You did a great job! I wish I could give you some tips but I'm not really good at drawing xDu
Keep it up!!
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Thank you very much !
Just knowing that some people like my draw makes me happy ^^
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