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Published: 2011-05-24 02:36:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 703; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 11
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Description This is me procrastinating because i can't get claudia's face right in the comic page i'm doing right now ¬_¬

Only thing i can think of is how weird it must be to have blood between your toes >.>

Dameon again because hes a fun subject to draw! I got bored with the piercings so just ended up making them random.


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Comments: 14

Latroma [2011-06-29 17:47:57 +0000 UTC]

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An interesting piece. The body alterations give the character a unique sort of feel that makes me a touch curious about his nationality and/or race. The piece is certainly evocative and draws the viewer's interest in this type of work. The character is attractive and the pose carries with it a good consistency of theme that seems to match actions, stance and facial expression.

Technique is good, but there is a bit of an issue when we hit the joints in particular. The head seems slightly low (or the trapezoids pronounced beyond natural levels for the position of the arms) and the elbow joints in particular feel... it's hard to quite say how they feel a bit disjointed, but they do feel slightly dislocated from the main part of the arm. The legs are better. I think what might be happening might be that you wanted a flush view of the back of the forearms but also the inside of the biceps, and I'm not 100% sure how naturally appearing the line that crosses down from the forearms on the inside looks, going fully to the base of the arm as it does.

Small technical matters aside, it's a pretty piece, and I think you've got the emotional imagery that you craved here pretty solidly.

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Djinngin In reply to Latroma [2011-06-29 20:42:26 +0000 UTC]

thankyou dear ^-^
i understand what you mean about the arms - i always have issues with this kind of position however its one of those things that i know somethings not right but i can never pinpoint.
however with dameons body i feel theres always something unusual about it - because he's not entirely human i like the idea that movement/generaly behaviour of him is always unusual.
i'm glad it gives impact ^-^ dameon is a character that has an air of menace that i try to put across in my works of him.
thanks for taking your time to critique - it certainly was useful!

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Latroma In reply to Djinngin [2011-06-29 21:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem. Happy to do a critique if I find the time and inclination. Glad it was useful.

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Djinngin In reply to Latroma [2011-06-30 21:21:16 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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Aq215 [2011-10-05 06:38:06 +0000 UTC]

He looks really cool here! Where did the blood come from though? O_O;;

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Djinngin In reply to Aq215 [2011-10-18 21:01:51 +0000 UTC]

haha! XD use your imagination

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Elphaba-Fae [2011-07-21 22:55:45 +0000 UTC]

....Why have I only just seen this?

LOVE

^_^ Where have his tats gone? Have they been replaced with piercings? ^_^ Yummy abs!

...I keep imagining squishy blood in my toes! ^_^

Love you! xx

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Djinngin In reply to Elphaba-Fae [2011-07-22 23:26:05 +0000 UTC]

because you never pay attention to me! 0...0

lol XD, hes hard not to love, even though hes psychotic - can't wait till i can draw him in my comic XD bit of a way a away yet though

squish squish! lol, love you to =3

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KasonSama [2011-05-24 02:44:11 +0000 UTC]

I bet it is, it's strange feeling sun block on your feet, let alone between your toes...

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Djinngin In reply to KasonSama [2011-05-24 15:34:08 +0000 UTC]

lol i know - all squishy XD

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KasonSama In reply to Djinngin [2011-05-25 02:25:26 +0000 UTC]

then you can head it...it's just icky thinking about it =/

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Djinngin In reply to KasonSama [2011-05-25 10:14:44 +0000 UTC]

head it? lol

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KasonSama In reply to Djinngin [2011-05-25 13:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Apparently, xD I cant recall what I was trying to say now... ;_;

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Djinngin In reply to KasonSama [2011-05-27 18:30:57 +0000 UTC]

^-^;;;

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