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As commissioned by The second page out of four to the conclusion of and 's The Nursery MachineRead the previous pages here: www.foxtalestimes.com/Comics/Tβ¦
Page 15:
Page 16: here
Page 17: coming later
Page 18 (final): coming sooner or later
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Its a shame they never finished it . Would have been interesting to see how it all turn out.
Sue
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Why? My artwork and paneling for those pages are terrible.
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Sounds like your a typical artist that never pleased with their own work. Which is normal for an artist knowing they can always do better. But it would be nice and of course a challenge to finish this story. That is the art in it self.Β Its always normal to be hard on your self, but don't be to hard those. Just go with your own natural flow. Myself I would like to see the girl shrunken down to the size of a baby by the robot then really be cared for like babied against her will.Β But that's my kind of thing those.Β So don't knoxΒ yourself so hard dear. So please keep trying and finish this strip. You owe it to yourself more than any thing else.Β
Sue
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So when will the comic be continued? or where can i read the rest of the story i have been following this thing for years ^^
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not sound like a nagging child but
"are they done yet?""are they done yet?""are they done yet?""are they done yet?""are they done yet?""are they done yet?""are they done yet?"
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looking forward to the final two pages of this
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oh, i just love it, please continue it, please please pleaseΒ Β Β Β
by the way, thats not one of cinderellas character?Β Β
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Great work, hope to see the red head padded as well!
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i dont get people complaining about continuity, and plotholes. i understand it completely!
the blonde girl applied first, but got turned into a big baby, the brown haired girl in a dress was the second applicant, and shes about to feel the wrath of the hands as well.Β
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I just wish it was that easy to get a job... I think I'm focusing on the wrong thing.
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Yesss! Another new page finally! ^^ can't wait for more!
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The girl in the red skirt and pink shirt was the original applicant? If so then that is a good twist, but the red head will get the fuck out after see realises her fate is to end up in diapers like the blond 18 year old. Also the mother didn't notice the blond 18 year old in diapers?
Eh even with all the plot holes, I still love this comic!
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You may not want to think about it too hard
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So happy to see another page of this! I LOVE the twist in the last panel, I can't wait to see what's on the next page! 
I also want to say that I really love your art style here, and the new look on the blonde girl is great. I have always liked the design of that robot as well, and you do such a good job with it. Very excited to see the rest!
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I agree a bit with yarrix. My only real complaint though (and minor, still love the comic), is the blondes new look- looks too similar to a diapered pic of Chi on this site- scarringly similar X/ great work though ^^
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The hair wasn't my choice, it was the guy who commissioned the page but I do see what you mean.
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Oh! Then never mind the comment then- thought it was your choice thing. Knew you were taking over carotte's work, just didn't know it was someone else comisioning from you . It's still good, don't worry ^^
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Well the deal is that the client said that carrote posted what would have happened if it continued back on Fox Tales Times before the forums rebooted
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I'm happy that there is a new page. But I have to say: I liked the previous style more.
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you mean the pages on Fox Tales Time? Well that was a different artist.
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No, I mean the last one. Page 15. I can't really explain but, I liked that more as this one.
Don't get me wrong, it still looks good and I will continue reading it but it just seems... different.
That's at least my Opinion on this.
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