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Djoseph — Still senryu
Published: 2011-01-15 02:54:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 306; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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waking up expecting
to see her
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Comments: 13

Lawofreflection [2011-03-06 00:54:19 +0000 UTC]

No experience? It sounds almost offending!

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Djoseph In reply to Lawofreflection [2011-03-06 13:46:29 +0000 UTC]

It's not like you ever left me never to return or died or something honey.

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Lawofreflection In reply to Djoseph [2011-03-06 15:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Aaaa... What a nice thing to say just some hours before I have to board a plane honey!

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Djoseph In reply to Lawofreflection [2011-03-11 05:12:52 +0000 UTC]

It's good to have you back home.

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norui [2011-02-12 02:33:27 +0000 UTC]

Well done! Your work has earned an Honorable Mention in the Haiku Club's 2010 Open Spaces Contest .



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Djoseph In reply to norui [2011-02-12 11:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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mreid973 [2011-02-11 01:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Lack of personal experience aside, the first line makes the poem work. Also, congratulations.

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Djoseph In reply to mreid973 [2011-02-11 22:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it.

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saiun [2011-01-15 19:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Accepted for the Haiku Club's 2010 Open Spaces Contest ! Make sure to check out the other entries and our contest history as well.

Good luck and consider participating in our other active events .



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rlkirkland [2011-01-15 13:43:53 +0000 UTC]

WD-40 works on rust for us yanks...
Whew, before your comment I was worried for you.

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Djoseph In reply to rlkirkland [2011-01-16 10:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Am I supposed to drink it? It says it "MAY CAUSE IRRITATION, NAUSEA, VOMITING AND DIARRHEA."

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rlkirkland In reply to Djoseph [2011-01-16 14:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Gaa...
..............Uh - no

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Djoseph In reply to rlkirkland [2011-01-18 08:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh... darn.

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