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Foxy-Knight [2013-11-07 17:30:46 +0000 UTC]
now this is good, I mean really it's like a sci-fi horror crime noir! Bloody hell man this is epic, you've managed to do a very well seasoned piece that works even out of the halloween season. Well done, I find the villain in question to be tragic and her end whilst inevitable breaks my heart. This has all the makings of a proper batman comic story and I hope it does become just that some day, well done indeed. It was also good to see the fear factor upped for the heroes too, very macabre indeed and poor Joey facing his first really monster...never a good time. So on the whole beautiful work indeed my friend, scary, tragic and epic...well done.
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4ScarfAce4 [2013-10-30 21:28:39 +0000 UTC]
Well, I certainly wasn't expecting that real-life reference. Thank you, Dkalban, for giving us a great comic-to-prose translation.
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4ScarfAce4 In reply to Dkalban [2013-10-30 21:32:47 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I was actually referring to the Batman concept starting as a comic.
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Dkalban In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-10-30 21:35:35 +0000 UTC]
Ah good point.
Sometimes they make novels out of major story arcs
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4ScarfAce4 In reply to Dkalban [2013-10-30 21:38:37 +0000 UTC]
Also true, although the collected arc would probably also make a good graphic novel.
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Dkalban In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-10-30 21:40:12 +0000 UTC]
Yep. If I ever choose to script it properly XD
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4ScarfAce4 In reply to Dkalban [2013-10-30 21:55:34 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's up to you. But it would be awesome to see.
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Nate-Wolf-Runyon [2013-10-30 03:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Isn't that one of the masks you find in Tomb Raider?
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Dkalban In reply to Nate-Wolf-Runyon [2013-10-30 03:46:31 +0000 UTC]
Yes. Did a image search for Noh masks (as it fits the story's killer), and I found this screenshot. And it just fit. Copied it, cropped and put everything together in Paint.
It's a pain that PDFs need a preview image, but I try to think of something.
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Offroadgirl [2013-10-30 01:35:59 +0000 UTC]
AAAHHH!!
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Offroadgirl In reply to Dkalban [2013-10-30 02:53:54 +0000 UTC]
The facial expression
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Fairy-Jewel [2013-10-29 22:19:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to see if I can cook up a Halloween story of my own, too. Excellent work, by the way. I read part of your story earlier, but didn't get the chance to finish. Glad I did now.
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