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Athrubis [2019-10-17 11:32:45 +0000 UTC]
Give us part 7! Lol
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Core1948 [2018-08-29 04:52:04 +0000 UTC]
Cool, not sure if I’ve read the other 5 yet, so BINGE TIME!!!
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dkfenger In reply to Core1948 [2018-08-29 14:59:05 +0000 UTC]
The other 5 are pretty short, especially the first few.
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Core1948 In reply to dkfenger [2018-08-30 03:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Kills time
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login111true [2018-08-29 02:17:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Didn't expect you to just go and jump at it like you did xD I'd ask for MOAR but I'm sure you've got other stuff to worry about! Like, Moonstone... And The Button, probably
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dkfenger In reply to login111true [2018-08-29 14:58:50 +0000 UTC]
Hah, you're welcome. I hadn't looked at this story in ages, and when I checked my notes, the story just wanted to write itself...
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dkfenger In reply to login111true [2018-08-29 20:54:23 +0000 UTC]
I have a sense of the next scene, starting with Rebecca's reappearance and a reveal of what has happened for the past week... I've got one beat sort-of figured out, but past there it seems to sort of meander into "and they lived happily if weirdly ever after" land.
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HeraldOfOpera [2018-08-29 00:27:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, you have a lot of avenues for continuations, never mind the shared universes. (Obligatory "what happened to Xevozz" is obligatory.)
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dkfenger In reply to HeraldOfOpera [2018-08-29 00:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh, Xevozz! My most bitter loss - I had the first chapter of the first Xevozz story written on a machine I lost access to, and had to rewrite the whole thing from memory. I swear that first version was so much better, though I've mostly forgotten why.
I had a few other ideas for him, though some of them chased off into other settings. The idea was to have a few short stories, each around a device that looks like the same monolithic obsidian rectangle as the Super Sucker, but each functioning radically differently.
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dkfenger In reply to login111true [2018-08-29 14:58:18 +0000 UTC]
There are other things I'd rather rewrite, like Button 1-6 or Ravelled. And if I were to work on a Xevozz scene, I'd rather it be a new scene for a new story...
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