Comments: 33
takemydreams [2013-09-22 00:20:08 +0000 UTC]
This is both gorgeous and horrific, I've just read all the stories twice... It's stunning writing, you can just feel everything and it's an amazing scenario, controlling some-one's every move while they're totally aware but totally powerless...
What I'm trying to say and failing is that it's bloody fantastic, and I take my hat off to you sir *hat tip*
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deathbringer66 [2013-03-20 01:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Ohmygosh that nearly made me cum just reading it. I want one of those suits that is so amazing...this poor slave is going tog et tortured beyond all reason and its just awesome. the only disadvantage is god...could you feel a whip through that? Mmm if you could id do it willingly.
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siyeh75 [2012-05-09 03:40:15 +0000 UTC]
I don't know where you get these ideas. They are so original and creative. And mixed with the age-old tales of slavery, dominance, and carnal desires... Just wonderful master dL
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siyeh75 In reply to dlboy78 [2012-05-09 04:25:30 +0000 UTC]
Us, well... Like I said. It's good.
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dlboy78 In reply to siyeh75 [2012-05-09 04:28:20 +0000 UTC]
and I meant [link] since it didn't like a thumbnail in a reply
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siyeh75 In reply to FaeryInAJar [2012-05-09 03:38:34 +0000 UTC]
reminded me of another Jesse. what the heck ever happened to him, huh?
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FaeryInAJar In reply to siyeh75 [2012-05-10 00:53:26 +0000 UTC]
I, um, well... I seem to have *cough* misplaced him. *cough* Or maybe I just forgot to ungag him. That would explain why he's been so quiet lately...
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FaeryInAJar In reply to siyeh75 [2012-05-10 01:37:21 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm actually sort of working on it now, but I have a slight problem.
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dlboy78 In reply to siyeh75 [2012-05-09 03:48:52 +0000 UTC]
Well last I checked the other Jesse had a 'happy ending' or some junk lol
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siyeh75 In reply to dlboy78 [2012-05-09 04:24:15 +0000 UTC]
There must be a lot of Jesses.
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PetboyJoshua [2012-05-09 01:19:49 +0000 UTC]
Heheh, you sure know what's relevant to my interests.
I think there's, like, a ton of stuff in that story that y enjoy, and not only the last part, but the beginning too... tests, drugs, unscrupulous organisation leaders,... and of course, delicious torture, and a fate I'd love to share... being forced to be someone's pet, permanently encased... mmmh !
The two first parts makes me wonder about what's behind all of this, though, I'm curious ! :'p
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PupLeo [2012-05-08 20:12:11 +0000 UTC]
ohh wow I want one, lol :3
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PupLeo In reply to dlboy78 [2012-05-08 20:20:34 +0000 UTC]
Yup, latex is fun, yummy fun :3
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waltb2b [2012-05-08 09:15:04 +0000 UTC]
I found your theme intriguing with an almost unlimited potential for development and amusement. The first part, ypu knew what you were talking about, but it was impossible to guess where you were heading it was difficult to remain attached to see where you'd come out. In face we are left with a hyper horny, partially ambulatory rubber body bag that can't be touched without it going into partial orgasmic fits. perhaps we put him to work in a car wash and record his orgasmic reactions, set them to music and market it as the hottest show since Michael Jackson.
It appears too much time was spent on the failure and retesting first part without telling us what the testing was especially for. The usual brilliance of your mind was way ahead of the pen and almost dethreaded what I'm sure will be a tight knit story line to follow. Be careful of letting your audience dwell to long on the short term "why" or you may lose them completely.
If I didn't think you had the capacity to do the job well, and enjoy the results of your improvement with you I
would not get much past "neet! keep it up" (which is safer but tells neither of us anything useful. Right?
Looking forward to #2 with the audience and the why in mind.
Aloha,
Walt
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waltb2b In reply to dlboy78 [2012-05-08 15:59:15 +0000 UTC]
as did I but I could see your sharp mind was off somewhere else. If I didn't point it out to you, you might never have caught it. You're good. Now let's be even better. OK? Your friend,
Walt
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Asomatica [2012-05-08 07:26:08 +0000 UTC]
Damn, that was really hot and awesome to read. Damn, I would love to have your creativity at such stories :3
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Asomatica In reply to dlboy78 [2012-05-08 07:58:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much :*
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