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Uzumaki Raiden and Wyatt Halliwell from my fic Ties That Bind, done by the ever-wonderful DomDozz.Raiden's kind of upset at the punishment of staying away from Wyatt. Wyatt's just trying to comfort him.
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Will DomDozz ever do one of Raiden at 16, maybe? How tall is he going to be? Closer to Sasuke's height or Naruto's? He's growing from a cutie to total hottie, which is a bit surprising for me, because I've never seen much appeal in the whole dirty-blondes. When I first read Bonded, I was hoping he'd be a brunette. I figured he'd be more handsome that way.
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H's going to be around 6'3-ish. His hair will darken a bit, but not much. I may have DD do one more pic, yes.
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sounds cool.
also do you take request?
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What do you mean by request...stories? No, not anymore, sorry.
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not story I mean drawing like I was going to ask you to draw something and it was about young Wyatt from Charmed?
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Oh, I'm afraid I'm no artist
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Then how did you draw this.
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I didn't? Says right there on the picture, lower left hand corner, that it was done for me by DomDozz.
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Wyatt as in Pipper baby son?
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how old doeos Wyatt get in the show?
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Tricky answer. Show technically ends with him 3 yrs old, but the last episode of season 8 showed us a time skip with him 25. There were a few episodes of him coming from the future, or else someone from the family traveling to the future, and we get to see 25 yr old Wyatt then.
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So very cute. <3
Comfort sex is needed. ;D
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They didn't have sex yet, as they're 13-14 respectively. Almost, but not quite!
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i forgot to mention:
the thoughts and conversation aime had with chouchi's son was insightful and thoughtful and added some more depth and understanding to her character.
the triplets theory about the original egg being ryota and when joined by his other 2 pieces of egg or brothers- his power is complete- that was a really smart and interesting part of the story.
raiden's move to kill the creature he created by biting 1 of kiba's daughters and his impassioned speech about not being able to lose wyatt was really emotional and gave us more understanding and insight to raiden's and wyatt's characters.
the beast/girl would seem to be a hinderance and distraction- you've been having the teachers sending them away or threatening to kill- why they wouldn't kill the beast/demon/girl is beyond understanding- the almost heartless characters and one mindedness you've put into the teachers- especially kushina- leaves me to think she'd kill it immediately. they even said it would be a distraction and wouldn't be able to keep up--everything they've been preaching about not needing and/or wanting on the plateau. why demon and sasuke prevented raiden from cleaning up his own mess by killing it also surprised me. he was going to take responsibility for his actions and try to keep his lover wyatt in one stroke- 2 things that would keep the peace on the plateau- and the logical solution- yet you kept the girl/beast/demon alive. it just didn't flow with the rest of the way you've played out other situations and the almost ruthlessness and heartlessness you've written into the teachers-when dealing with things that could disrupt training and reaching goals.
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from your fanfiction.net profile:
(things I'm unable to write about:
lemons with 12-13 year olds)
yet in the last 2 chapters of your last in the trilogy of the 'ties that bind' series- you have two 13 year olds having sex and making it part beastiality/demoniality to make it even more disturbing. you included blood play, biting, crotch sniffing, etc...
("Andβ¦now what? You've brought Hisa here to be at his side, to be his mate? My kid is thirteen, Kiba-")
raiden's sister is 1 or 2 years younger- making her 10 or 11- and you have her and chouji's son kissing and her spending the nights at his family compound-
you have a very vivid imagination and write about really unusual and quite impossible things.
the art is wonderful- the character of raiden is a great original character- very complex and individual and layered and multi-dimensional_ you put a lot into creating him. i admire the effort and talent that you put into your writing. some of it i find delusional and illogical and 'wtf'_ but most of it i find interesting and entertaining.
fly your freak flag proudly- authors who block reviewers who don't fawn over them need to develop a thicker skin and not take comments so personally. even a reviewer who attacks or hates part of a story or a character have something positive to give you- your writing has made them feel strongly for your characters and find your AU interesting- they are able to suspend their sense of disbelief and it makes them feel more emotion from your characters and writing- sometimes it's really good, sometimes it's really bad, and sometimes the comments may be just average---but if you can get an emotional reaction from a reader/reviewer- good or bad_ you've got to take it as a good sign--because part of your writing/story makes them care enough about it or its characters to either love or hate. your writing causes emotional responses in people- sometimes it is bad- but that's better than indifferent- at least you can make your reader feel anger or disbelief or disgust- it means your writing has power enough to make the reader/reviewer react---so a negative reaction is better than no reaction- if you follow.
continued good luck and fortune and happy writing
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As an avid lover of Dmnq8's stories, I feel that you are incorrect in some of your claims.
What you said about Chouji and Aimi and that part of it is really all up to you, and it's fine that you feel that way. But from this point on: "...you have a very vivid imagination and write about really unusual and quite impossible things."
You've really just crossed a line. Really unusual and impossible things? So what, science fiction and fiction in general really are ALL NORMAL AND COMPLETELY WITHIN THE REALM OF TODAYS LAWS OF GRAVITY, PHYSICS, ETC? I think not. And "delusional"? What exactly do you you mean delusional? Are you talking about DMNQ8 herself or some element within the story? I'd really like to know seeing as you call her a freak a sentence later.
Btw, while most author's enjoy getting reviews, a very large number of reviews are filled with just "OMG UPDATE" and "hurry up and post nxt chapter!". While it's nice to see people review, none of those kinds of reviews are helpful or constructive so the last thing an author wants to see is someone going all Rambo on their story. Expressing your dislike is one thing, and attacking is an entirely different matter. Also barely any bad reviews are helpful at all, since just about all of them bash a story or an author and hide behind their internet aliases and anonymity instead of justifying anything (not referring to you in this case).
A negative reaction is better than no reaction? Tell that to the fanfic authors who were flamed so badly they had to leave their accounts and delete their stories. I'm sure they would disagree.
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ooo loves it gonna go read the chapter now
sexykakashi99
^^
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omg i love it! now i have a visual and i'm happy to say my imagination was not far off at all lol!
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well, good then! Dom and I go back and forth a lot with me perfecting the description until its right.
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Love it! I've been waiting to see if there was a picture and they look just like i thought they would! Beautiful as always~
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Yeah, I'm already in love with it myself...
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i sincerely thankyou all for your appreciation on the art i made for dmnq8 
thanks for dmnq8 too for giving me the chance to draw them
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i sincerely thankyou all for your appreciation on the art i made for dmnq8
thanks for dmnq8 too for giving me the chance to draw them
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hott... lol definitely one of my fave pairings ever!
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niceness!!! I likez it... though I imagined Wyatt to be skinnier lulz
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well, he HAS been training with Lee for a while by this point, neh? lol
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More amazing art, as always from Dommy.
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