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docusfin — Daughters Rest
Published: 2012-03-01 10:12:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description I stand in the room at my daughters bedside,
She looks up at me with worried eyes wide.
I smile, a mask to hide behind,
and brighten her life in this world unkind.

She smiles, once more an angels face,  
A proper look to enter Gods place,
And closing her eyes, her last breath escapes.
With a tear and a sob, my heart finally breaks.

I sit in the field, where my daughter sleeps.
There is no smile, my heart still weeps.
I pray to God, her soul to keep,
and take me from this world so bleak.
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Comments: 5

OpenCagePoetry [2012-03-01 16:01:43 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad....very emotional. I love it. You did a great job. This brought tears to my eyes.

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docusfin In reply to OpenCagePoetry [2012-03-02 04:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm touched you felt so strongly about it. Thank you again.

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OpenCagePoetry In reply to docusfin [2012-03-03 03:37:43 +0000 UTC]

you're more than welcome. It is definitely a wonderful piece.

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MonicaArlene [2012-03-01 15:16:25 +0000 UTC]

This is so emotional and wonderfully written! I think you should check your grammar a bit, but it ended on the perfect note, and it was a very nice read!

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docusfin In reply to MonicaArlene [2012-03-02 05:02:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm happy you like it and I'll look into the grammar.

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