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Published: 2005-06-02 15:36:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1102; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 326
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well just another shot from the session with a friend of mine.I'm not 100% satisfied with this one but i'm still uploading it as i think perhaps you can tell me whats wrong with it...
other shots from this session:
smiling back
smiling back -bw
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nothing is wrong with it, in my humble opinion
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I don't really know what to say being wrong with that pictures. Tones are great, DOP is really nicely used and the skin of the model is just great... I love it, just the way it is.
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Well it's a lovely picture. I'm not sure why you're not 100% satisfied with it. One thing I must note that although the title is "eyes", I'm more drawn to the bridge of her nose rather than her eyes (or eye for that matter).
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There's nothing wrong with this, it is perfect actually
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Wow - perfect play with the focus! I love the low-key-style of this one.
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love the low depth of field, nice effect on the eyelashes
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I think the composition and the lighting is really good. I don't mind the narrow depth either.
I do agree that it needs some more contrast though. I copied it and upped the contrast in
photo shop and it seemed to be better.
Other than the contrast, I think it is good.
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thanks for you help. i increased the contrast (and darkend the picture by this). i hope you like it better now
greets Ole
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uhm I'd just try more contrast... it might add some definition without using any sharpening, and that would also leave the "dreamy" mood intact
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thanks for your comment
i increased the contrast. i hope its better now
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you're welcome 
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Also, try clearing out the freckles, especially on the nose and forehead, I think I'd use it as a desktop background if that was cleared up. I think it's a really great picture.
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I think the only fault I can see in it, is the blurryness of the chin,
I would have sharpened the whole face, as the angle already adresses the eyes.
Otherwise a nice shot.
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well because of the bad light i was forced to use a wide opend shutter. so it wasn't realy possible to make the whole face as sharp as the part arround the eyes. (and i realy like the blurry character of this
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