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Dokusa — Raffle Prize for Lunar!

Published: 2016-11-06 23:37:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 317; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description I thought the bg would fit the name

*inhales the sun*
Lit.
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ArtyTyler [2016-11-07 03:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This is beautifully done.
The shading and lighting looks great in this piece, you can tell the direction of the main light source.
The expression has been done well, and the pose and scarf go well in their positions.
The background, as well, is great. It draws your attention, but doesn't take too much away from the foreground either. It's a good balance.
Personally, maybe having a few more stars placed on the darker areas would work well in this too, as it would show the odd star despite it not being too close to the galaxy clusters. On stars, they're nicely shaped with difference in sizes that impacts better than a lot of them in very similar sizes.
Overall, well done piece. It draws your eyes everywhere but doesn't stray too far from the main 'show.'

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Dokusa In reply to ArtyTyler [2016-11-07 03:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your time ^^! I will be sure to pay more attention to star distribution when I compose my next piece~ thanks for catching that!

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