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Published: 2011-02-06 18:04:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 956; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 7
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There's still so much time till summer, ahh. I just wanna lay on the beach and swin in the sea
This time - Victor, Yvessen Flowers
Sorry for anatomical errors, I still have much much to learn... But I just wanted to draw a guy once in a while
Pencil, Photoshop, Wacom tablet
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Critique requested from #AurumART-Seed :
First of all I would like to say that I really like the composition of your picture. I also adore his face 
If I should suggest something it would be to put more emphasis on the palm tree. Even if it isn`t in the the main focus, adding texture to the trunk would give your picture more dimension. Now your piece looks somewhat one-dimensional. Keep in mind the rules of perspective when rendering waves, which should become deeper as they come nearer to you.Water in a shore will have a smooth curving shape as it laps in on the sand.
Thank you for participating in the Critique day event
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Yeah, I should work more on the background. I focused rather on his body, than the water
Thank you, a critique like that is always helpful
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Nono, jaki przystojniak z zezem zbiżnym XDD
Ładny mu nos narysowałaś
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zeza ma? o_o hm nie widzę tego, ale hm, może może :/
dzieki
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Niewielki co prawda, ale wciąż zez
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Fajne kolorki, oczka tylko trochę płaskie przydałoby się wiecej cieni na galce ocznej i wokol na powiekach. I bardzo fajne morze w tle świenty kolor
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A możliwe.. zawsze najwięcej czasu poświęcam na twarz, ale widać i tak coś przeoczę 
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wacom bamboo fun, a5
thanks!
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Not to bad for male appearance, you should try rounding the chest less when shading though
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hm, that's a good idea, I really don't have much experience in drawing guys chests ^^" thanks
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No probs, I love drawing male chests XD
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