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donnaDomenitzo — Detective Mallorie Grant Part 2

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Description It had been three days since Mallorie had been assigned to the FBI to act as their decoy at the city Lolita convention.  Those days where spent in intense study and preparation.   First she was carefully briefed on each of the previous crimes.  

Over twenty women had been the victims.  There were maybe more.  The women had all essentially disappeared while in full Lolita costume.  No trace of any was found except for two.  The two exceptions were two women who had been drugged but were found before the abduction could be completed.  One had felt sick and managed to get to a public place and ask a stranger to help her which apparently interrupted the kidnapper’s plan.  The other had been found bound, gagged and drugged in the back of a rented white panel van after that van had been involved in a minor traffic accident.   The driver of the van had fled the scene and upon investigation the rental information all proved to be false and led no where.  Still, the FBI understood that dugging and abducting the women was part of the modes operandi.   The other women all simply disappeared and although there was some video evidence of them being led away by an unidentified male, there were no other leads.

The majority of the rest of the preparation time involved Detective Grant immersing herself in the Lolita culture primary through you tube videos.   She was also introduced to Ethy, one of the local Lolita girls who was also an organizer of the con.   Ethy's job was to help Detective Grant with her Lolita costume and fitting in the Lolita culture.

Creating the Lolita look turned out to be a time consuming and exacting process.  First, they had to determine what kind of Lolita Grant would be.  Then they had to assemble a proper costume.  Then they had to put it all together with makeup and wig for the convention.

The final result, as Grant minced into the FBI Task Force conference room for the final team brief before moving to the con was impressive and dramatic.   She felt exposed in the cosplay outfit.  She had been a decoy before, often wearing revealing clothes, but somehow this outfit was worse.  It was just not just revealing, it was humiliating.   Worse, she could feel a dampness in her panties.  Being seen in the outfit was turning her on and that reinforced her embarrassment.

Gone were Grant’s typical skinny jeans, tank top and leather jacket.  In their place were high heeled and multi-buckle stiletto Mary Janes.  Ethy had decided a goth Lolita suited Grant’s personality best, and so dark patterned hose covered her legs.  They wanted to draw attention, so the skirt and accompanying petticoat were extremely short and topped by a waist crunching black corset top.  The effect was to show a lot of leg and even more cleavage.  Crowning the outfit was Mallorie’s black contact lenses making her eyes look large and soft, and dark flawlessly applied and dramatic makeup framed by a large super curly wig with a large crimson bow.  A pretty parasol was her only accessory.

A hush fell over the ten agents assembled for the briefing as all eyes fixed on Grant who could only walk slowly and carefully in the 5 ½ inch heels.    Senior Agent Jenkins stopped talking as everyone watched Mallorie daintily cross the fifteen feet from the door to an empty seat.  No one started to breath again until after Mallorie sat and demurely crossed her legs and tugged the super short skirt hem as far down as possible –which wasn’t very far.

Agent Jenkins coughed to get everyone’s attention back on him and quickly summarized the plan that they had all developed in detail over the last few days.
 
“So, in summary, with the tracking device in Mallorie’s bow and four agents providing protection at the con never letting her out of their sight, we should be able to detect and prevent any attempt to abduct the disguised Detective Grant.  Are there any questions?”

When no questions were forthcoming half of the team went off shift and the other half moved with Mallorie to the front of Police Headquarters.  She would take a taxi to the con while the support agents would follow behind her in unmarked vehicles to provide her backup.  She stood in front of Police Headquarters idly awaiting the taxi to arrive and caught hard and in almost all cases lecherous stares from almost everyone entering the building.  None of the dozen cops who passed and admiringly examined the sexy Lolita gave a hint that they recognized her as one of their own.
 
Mallorie blushed furiously the entire time under the thick foundation makeup she was wearing.   She was amazed that not even her former partner,  Patrol Sergeant Bennette, recognized her as he passed with a box of doughnuts and coffee.  Even her happily married with three kids friend could not help but look at her closely and appreciatively from the tip of her stiletto heels to the top of the big bright red bow in her hair without any idea who she was.

Then the cab pulled up and the hunt was afoot.

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Daz3D Iray with a G3 model. 

See part I of this story here:



Continues in Part 3:

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Comments: 49

ErikavonHeim [2021-01-01 10:20:43 +0000 UTC]

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ala33 [2019-07-29 01:40:35 +0000 UTC]

Mallorie to self : dam heels are killing me
cabbie : I see ur working the con
mallorie : what

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ashleychloro [2018-08-19 15:06:53 +0000 UTC]

She can pass a hot young rookie cop

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scorpionlover42 [2018-01-18 15:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I see how that outfit would be out of place at the FBI, but what a displacement.  

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to scorpionlover42 [2018-01-24 17:00:03 +0000 UTC]

  It would be out of place a lot of places SL!

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bob-warden [2018-01-13 21:14:13 +0000 UTC]

Now that's an impressive transformation. Lovely costume, although she looked just as great in her jeans and tank top.

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to bob-warden [2018-01-18 14:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Bob!

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Curia-DD [2018-01-12 18:07:06 +0000 UTC]

Her transformation is amazing!!!

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Curia-DD [2018-01-13 17:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you DD... I love the transformation aspect!

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ShadowhawkOne [2018-01-12 16:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh this is looking better and better! Never trust the FBI Mallorie!

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2018-01-13 17:20:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it Roy...and definitely yes on the FBI!

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to donnaDomenitzo [2018-01-13 17:40:34 +0000 UTC]

FBI = BAD!!!!

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hmbugs [2018-01-12 07:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh my...she's definitely going to turn a lot of heads at the convention in that sexy outfit!    Delicious!    

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to hmbugs [2018-01-12 15:16:31 +0000 UTC]

I think that was the FBI's intent bugs!

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Malasorte504 [2018-01-11 05:35:14 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Can I ger get more from her?

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Malasorte504 [2018-01-12 15:16:15 +0000 UTC]

  There will be a good bit more posted

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Ashkanie2 [2018-01-10 21:54:42 +0000 UTC]

Great art

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Ashkanie2 [2018-01-12 15:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Ash

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leatherslut1 [2018-01-10 14:54:14 +0000 UTC]

I wonder who this detective could be modelled after, I love Abby in N.C.I.S. So beautiful and the sexy goth attire, this could also be what she could be if Abby didn't go into forensics, great work

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to leatherslut1 [2018-01-12 15:14:34 +0000 UTC]

  See the note below LS...  This is a very typical and standard Lolita look which tend to be either very dark for very light.   I liked the dark version because it contrasts more with her normal look, but I could have just as easily gone in the opposite direction with lots of pink and her as a blonde.

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leatherslut1 In reply to donnaDomenitzo [2018-01-12 15:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Sorry i had made the comment after a long shift at work and was feeling tired

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to leatherslut1 [2018-01-12 15:18:57 +0000 UTC]

No worries... it reinforced that connection which I totally didn't see!  All comments are great comments to me L!

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leatherslut1 In reply to donnaDomenitzo [2018-01-12 15:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Although mallorie is a character that has nothing to do with ncis, the resemblance with the outfit is uncanny ☺

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paws4thot [2018-01-10 14:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Great art and story.

I've got to ask though; was the character's look inspired at all by Abby Scuitto in NCIS?

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to paws4thot [2018-01-12 15:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Actually not paws... though I definitely see the resemblance ....  I saw this costume set online and thought it was too cute not to do something with it.

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paws4thot In reply to donnaDomenitzo [2018-01-12 15:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh I agree. I wouldn't even have asked if I didn't have respect for Abby.

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loisishot [2018-01-10 13:52:27 +0000 UTC]

"In their place were high heeled and multi-buckle stiletto Mary Janes." you mean PLATFORM Mary Janes.......they'll never catch me. However that make up might make me bite. If I get her I'll put the proper heels on before the fun begins.

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to loisishot [2018-01-12 15:11:52 +0000 UTC]

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scorpionlover42 [2018-01-10 13:11:03 +0000 UTC]

I'd tell her anything! Truth, plus some lies to keep the conversation going!

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to scorpionlover42 [2018-01-12 15:11:17 +0000 UTC]

She 's really not dressed for conversation SL!

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loisishot In reply to scorpionlover42 [2018-01-10 13:58:33 +0000 UTC]

They talk? They only have mouths for 2 reasons. 1. Eating 2. ******* ****

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Becarra [2018-01-10 11:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Utterly gorgeous!

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Becarra [2018-01-12 15:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Becarra!

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BenJohn9 [2018-01-10 05:35:38 +0000 UTC]

This is just awesome, can't wait to see how the story continues!       

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to BenJohn9 [2018-01-12 15:10:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you are enjoying Ben!

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Dangerguy01 [2018-01-10 03:09:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm betting the bow will be the first thing the bad guys remove.

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Dangerguy01 [2018-01-12 15:10:25 +0000 UTC]

That very well could be  Danger!

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sissycross [2018-01-09 23:32:08 +0000 UTC]

omg she is so cute 😍😍

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to sissycross [2018-01-12 15:10:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SC!

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sthlrd67 [2018-01-09 23:21:18 +0000 UTC]

Excellent chapter and one hot costume for the con.

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to sthlrd67 [2018-01-12 15:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sthlrd!

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TazLooking [2018-01-09 22:23:10 +0000 UTC]

My, my, my... Ethy (this name has a familiar ring to it) has done a fantastic job with the Detective's Con costume as a Lolita!!!!!   
Ms. Grant should certainly attract attention at the Con, desired and not!!!! Four watchers may not be enough to provide safe cover for the Detective!!!!!
First concern should be the taxi driver, will she even get to the Con?????  
I love the way this adventure story is shaping up!!!!!!    

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to TazLooking [2018-01-12 15:09:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you are enjoying it Taz!

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coppola76 [2018-01-09 22:04:14 +0000 UTC]

great story!

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to coppola76 [2018-01-12 15:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you coppola!

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cathycd [2018-01-09 21:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Fun style!

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to cathycd [2018-01-12 15:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you cathy!

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Rogue7 [2018-01-09 20:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful render, going to be an interesting story

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donnaDomenitzo In reply to Rogue7 [2018-01-12 15:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Rogue!... I hope you continue to enjoy it!

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