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catstache87 [2018-10-17 04:11:13 +0000 UTC]
A very good strong momma.
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DonnyAnne In reply to catstache87 [2018-10-22 09:21:18 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh yes! Pure strong mama
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smolstiel [2018-05-27 18:50:43 +0000 UTC]
this is beautiful
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Jackspedicey [2018-05-21 14:24:14 +0000 UTC]
Aw..this picture alone made my day! I could almost feel the warmness radiating off it.
Btw, do you have any writing tips in mind? I launched a new series, and I want to polish, enhance and (most importantly) improve it as much as I can. Thanks!
Also when is is the new chap coming out? I'm already excited for it. No doubt that it would be full of awesome stuff in it!
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DonnyAnne In reply to Jackspedicey [2018-06-05 05:51:36 +0000 UTC]
EEEEE thank you!!! ;v;
aaaahhhh there's so much lmao! It depends for what kind of story you're doing and writing type and what you want tips on so i'll try not to get so carried away and bore you rn since i don't know lol buT!!
- Organize ideas!!! Before you finalize what's going on in your story, make sure you've gathered as many ideas as you can and decide which ones to incorporate. (A huge problem I had before was I was too excited to share that I ended up with so many rewrites lmao, which is why my other stories are taking MUCH longer to come out)
- Try saying dialogue out loud to make sure it sounds like something someone would really say, since narration is different from dialogue. And it's good to give each character a different type of dialogue even if it's just through something small (ex: Ernest and Carmen curse more often in both internal/external dialogue because they are more hotheaded people, Kyle never says/thinks the word "God" because of the culture he grew up in)
- It's good to think up an entire story for a character, even if it won't be a focus in the story or even hinted at, it helps you know who the character is, and so it can help with their actions/dialogue
- If there's something you need to research in, make sure you do lots and lots and LOTS of it!
- When editing make sure there's just enough ideas/foreshadowing/development/etc in there!
- I WOULD say "write everyday" because it is the BEST tip but I'm not good at that myself asdfghj so if you can't do thAT like me, come up with ideas/ways to improve in casual daydreaming sessions and write them down if you can! Every day as punishment for not writing SOBS
- MOST IMPORTANTLY, have fun and love love love it! Keeping love for your story/characters will keep you loving writing/improving it!
I follow tons and tons of writing blogs that can help in a variety of topics. Nimble'sNotebook is the best that I can remember by name lol
Aaaaahhhh good luck!!! ;A; I still need to get on your stuff aahhh, so happy semester is finally over so I'll have more time to do that ;w;
It's almost half finished! The rest of the chapters will be shorter (aka not a whole telling of their entire freaking day asdfghj) so they should come out much faster! ;v; Thanks so much for keeping up with the story!
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ValGames [2018-05-14 15:21:45 +0000 UTC]
Awww this teddy bear is so cute and fluffy! I wish I could hug it :3
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DonnyAnne In reply to ValGames [2018-06-04 23:32:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! It truly is a blessed teddy TwT
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