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EFantasy89 [2016-02-09 11:15:29 +0000 UTC]
Good story.
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grapehyacinth [2015-12-04 18:09:35 +0000 UTC]
This is great! Are you going to continue it?
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DonPretzel In reply to grapehyacinth [2015-12-04 18:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Ah thanks! I haven't planned on it, I just wanted to do a proper version of the event from the sketch page in my scraps.
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grapehyacinth In reply to DonPretzel [2015-12-06 15:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Too bad. You could do a lot with the premise.
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DonPretzel In reply to grapehyacinth [2015-12-06 17:31:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm not much of a writer though. I have other stories on the back burner from a few years back that I don't care to finish.
I just had another idea where the magicians advertising poster has him stood to one side on it, looking like he's presenting something but there's nothing there in the space he's suggesting at. With the same picture on the flyers and tickets. During the show he makes a volunteer disappear by walking into a big sheet of paper hung up. Then he turns the sheet around to reveal that it's the poster and the volunteer is now stood frozen flat right where the magician is pointing in it. He then asks everyone to look at their tickets or flyers and miraculously the volunteer is on every one of them.
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grapehyacinth In reply to DonPretzel [2015-12-06 17:52:17 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome! You can even make a picture with it. I love to see actual illustrated stories.
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DonPretzel In reply to grapehyacinth [2015-12-06 18:01:31 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, maybe I should do that one day, usually I'll make it a comic page or two, but an illustrated story covers both ends nicely.
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