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Marge62 [2014-12-27 04:04:45 +0000 UTC]
Hail Ysera!
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Marge62 [2014-05-25 03:49:58 +0000 UTC]
Ysera is gorgeous is there a line for being next?
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Donutwish In reply to Marge62 [2014-05-25 13:27:23 +0000 UTC]
You could try making a pilgrimage to her forest shrine and making an offering there!
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Marge62 In reply to Donutwish [2014-05-25 18:03:32 +0000 UTC]
hmm i'd have to discover it, and bring someone with me to make sure I don't get away!
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Mainthegap [2013-12-10 03:23:46 +0000 UTC]
i love the shape of the sacrifical victim in her throat :3
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hortrorog [2011-12-11 13:50:49 +0000 UTC]
dafuq was that lol
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OSU2000fan [2011-03-12 00:05:00 +0000 UTC]
Good Drawing. The outline in her neck is good continuation in the series.
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notthisguy2 [2011-02-25 01:51:58 +0000 UTC]
that's...sad...
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lol, it's well drawn, but seeing her go down the throat...AHHHHHh
lolo
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Donutwish In reply to notthisguy2 [2011-02-25 02:03:08 +0000 UTC]
As they say, once you hit the bottom, there's no where else to go but up. Ok nevermind, that totally doesn't apply to this situation!
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notthisguy2 In reply to Donutwish [2011-02-25 02:18:49 +0000 UTC]
the plot twist is there is no stomach...just another mouth!
DUN DUN DUUUUN
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sigel4ever [2011-02-24 03:13:33 +0000 UTC]
nice
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ColdBrush [2011-02-24 00:45:50 +0000 UTC]
There's the sexy throat bulge. This image just hit one of my favorites in the list. Well done my friend.
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Dragon-Ex [2011-02-24 00:19:52 +0000 UTC]
very nice bulge in her throat. I'd love to see all these animated together!
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Donutwish In reply to Dragon-Ex [2011-02-24 01:02:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was worried about how this picture would turn out, especially if it would look too subtle.
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Ginbug [2011-02-23 23:31:46 +0000 UTC]
Nice job, just finished reading up on it now...cool story, and I like the sort of open ended ending. Let's the mind wonder what exactly the druids vision was, and where they might go afterward. The aspects I mean.
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Donutwish In reply to Ginbug [2011-02-23 23:35:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was worried the ending would be seen as a bit cheesey, but I couldn't finish the story without an element of salvation and redemption for the characters.
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Ginbug In reply to Donutwish [2011-02-23 23:36:15 +0000 UTC]
hehe...wellll technically you could. but then it would be a tragedy.
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Ginbug In reply to Donutwish [2011-02-24 00:05:07 +0000 UTC]
I've considered doing a tragedy before...when I've been in the mood to write something dark. XD
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Donutwish In reply to Ginbug [2011-02-24 00:12:33 +0000 UTC]
You should do it!
I know I'm too sentimental to pull it off successfully, heh.
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Ginbug In reply to Donutwish [2011-02-24 00:27:02 +0000 UTC]
I am a bit curious to know if the druid had been resurrected? or if she simply moved onto the next life at the end. either would make sense in the universe.
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Donutwish In reply to Ginbug [2011-02-24 01:18:40 +0000 UTC]
Those some of the possible explanations that were in my mind when I put that scene together, and I wanted it to be open-ended for the reader.
Originally, I had planned on Alexstrasza appearing sooner, after the druid had been swallowed, with the suggestion that she might have rescued the girl (and in turn, rescuing Ysera).
But I felt it would've had less impact if she was saved at the last moment. For me, the vision that she has at the end could be one of two things.
It could actually be divine intervention of sorts, a higher power easing and transitioning her into the afterlife. It could possibly be Elune or even Ysera taking action here.
The other possibility is that it's the last thought in her mind as she passes away, her mind traveling back in time, through her memories.
I don't want to flat out say that she doesn't get resurrected, but the druid's death is a toll that the Ysera character (and by extension, the reader) should pay.
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Ginbug In reply to Donutwish [2011-02-24 01:26:50 +0000 UTC]
sure, but her resurrection could serve an equally legitimate literary purpose. I think you did the right thing by leaving it open to translation, both on a literary standpoint and considering that it is a vore story and people have different tastes when it comes to how it should end.
The way I see it her resurrection could signify redemption for Ysera, in a way her sanity is being resurrected. This would be interesting because it seems that the main conflict in this story is an internal one, between a sane mind and an insane one. Her grief at the end could also serve this purpose, making for a little more somber end.
Either way nice work...if you can get people thinking by the end that is always a good thing.
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