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Doodle-Bel — Shrekilla Kill

Published: 2014-02-05 00:17:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 380; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 5
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Description A bad pun.
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Incognito9000 [2014-02-06 08:01:33 +0000 UTC]

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The drawing could be better, but the overall idea made me laugh for a good time, is so ridiculous (And original) that you probably opened Pandora's Box. There's potential to be exploited here, I am surprised is not swarmed in views considering the internet popularity from these characters, but the reason could be that the overall execution isn't good enough. Shreck and Senketsu look pretty spot on from their source material, but the outline is pretty crude, using a straight, continued line is the best thing to do for finished drawings, sketchy lines are good for sketches exclusively, as they make drawings look unfinished. I would also recommend to learn the use of shading and lighting better, is complicated to know where the light is coming and it makes it look kinda weird.

Also, if you make Donkey as Mako or Farquaad as Satsuki I'll love you for the rest of my life.

Shreck is Dreck.

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Doodle-Bel In reply to Incognito9000 [2014-02-07 14:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank so much for the critique!! First one yet. Yes this could have definitely been better. It was rushed however, a friend wanted to see what I could do. I should probably have used line work, made it more smooth. The Donkey as Mako and Farquaad as Satsuki sounds brilliant.  

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Nemesisprime91 [2015-06-09 15:58:31 +0000 UTC]

For a second there, i thought it was...never mind. Not going to open that can of worms.

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