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DoodleBuggy — BreadCrumbs 3 and 4
Published: 2007-01-13 03:29:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2910; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 35
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Ok this is the version of Molly the friendly dead girl, entitled Breadcrumbs, that I was going to send to RSOM. But I took so long to send it it has become out dated. My drawing style and story for the comic has changed since then so I will now be submitting it and create a new one for the up dated version.Related content
Comments: 8
The teddy bear is one controlling little peice of plush, huh?
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The dynamics between Mr.Buckels and Molly are perfect! Hmm... But Mr. Buckels seems a little suspicious to me... Hmm...
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I would hope the father loved them but how can you talk about guilt and not know what it is?
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Great linework, I also love the layout and the setup, it feels very professional.
I don't think you need to put the sound effects in Japanese, though, you are not aiming for a Japanese audience, I think.
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This is very good, but if you did want to sumbit it to that Tokyopop contest you'd have to fix those grammar errors.
In the very last panel it would be "You're not coming" not "Your not coming". Just remember "your" is posessive and "you're" is you are.^_^
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>< ooops I submited the unfixed version. I had thoes fixed but i have so many version of the comic I forget which one is which.
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