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Published: 2008-07-20 20:46:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 15035; Favourites: 151; Downloads: 101
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I really have to learn not to be such a perfectionist. I take way to much time on pages. I was planning on submitted the first couple pages instead of just one but I keep going back and editing things on the other pages so here is just page one. Enjoy!You are reading Jet-Lagged!
Chapter one page one:
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Luv how he's shirtless and all relaxed, and she looks almost ready for combat
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hehe... longshot has a sexy tummy X3
looks good with his hair down too...
oh crap... -wipes up tendril of drool-
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lol "sexy tummy" *snicker*
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i saw this and my eyes almost popped out of my head! I was like D@MN THATS ONE HOTT LONGSHOT!!! Nicely done 
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you know, i'm not a huge avatar fanatic. i prefer naruto, or full metal alchemist. but i love your style, and i love the freedom fighters. i say they should get a show all to themselves!
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Smellerbee looks great in the last panel, I actually know someone who sleeps like that
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when i saw these pages in your gallery i was all like: omgomgomgomgOMG!!!! really really cool.can't wait for page 3!
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Oh, and very nice work with the buildings in the top pannel! *is struck with perspective envy*
BTW is it okay with you if i post the sketch I did for this page in my scraps? Me jus luv sketchies! :3
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GNEEEEEEEEEEE!
You just made him smexier in your version!
Kehee! awesome.
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OMG!!! finally!!!
Longshot's so hot!!!!1!!!
hmmm, bee looks comfy... and slobbery
also great artistry, love the hair!
looking forwards to the next page
*ttly spazzes*
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I squealed when I saw this in my inbox. I was like YAY JL is back! XD
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LOL! I love SB's sleeping position. great job, and i cant wait for the next page!
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Wahahaha, that last panel makes the wait totally worth it. That's adorable!
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Finaly, an update!!
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Wait...
Oh, I haven't commented yet, have I? In that case it is rather hypocritical of me to say 'finaly', as if I gave you a reason to continue...
Anyway, very good job, I've read the rest of your story and it is very good, please continue.
Especialy since the series is now over and none of the importent questions have been answered.
Until then,
Racheakt
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AWWWW...That's so sweet how Longshot looks tenderly at Smellerbee
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Awh... So sweet! 
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Aww, she sleeps with her rump in the air. Also, Longshot's hair is such WIN I think I may tear up a bit.
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Haha, my six year old daughter sleeps like that.
Such a wonderful comic, I can't wait for more!
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Beautiful! 
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By-gawd!
.....wait a sec-....should I feel so wrong for staring at Longshot the way I just did?..
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shirtless longshot makes all the fangirls sqee ^_^
Great job! Can't wait for the next pages!!!
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The first panel, literally, I looked at it and - aloud - said "SNAPE!"
Then I looked at the other panels and drooled over how sexy he was.
Then I cracked up when I saw Sleeping Beeauty. XD Longshot better give her a good back-rub when she wakes up complaining about how much her neck hurts XP
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Awww Smellerbee is adorable. XD I know a girl that slept like that all the time.
And what a hot Longshot. :3
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yaaaaaay fanservice!!! (despite the fact longshot is total jailbait!)
aw, bee is drool on her pillow - she is going to have a massive crick in her neck, i can tell you from personal experience.
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I love how Smellerbee's sleeping! =win! 
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice. Can't wait for more pages. There is so much Freedom Fighter love going on lately on DA, what with PFF & this. *sighs happily*
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hehe, my five month old baby brother sleeps in the EXACT SAME position Smellerbee sleeps in
great start thus far, I look forward to all upcoming pages!
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Smellerbee's sleeping like my sister did when she was a baby XD
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finally!!! i been waitin so long for this, un!!
PS: Longshot is hot, yay!!!
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XD Longshot has a belly. XD And he looks kinda funny with his hair out of the ponytail. But we all look like a royal mess in the mornings, so he's forgiven.
I wonder how Smellerbee can sleep in such an uncomfortable position. And with such uncomfotable clothes.
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i figure she is a heavy sleeper, but will wake up with cricks in very parts of her body.
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I love smellerbee's pose.
well done, the timing of the panels is great.
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I wasn't sure what this was, right? I click on it, all "oooo what is it"
and then I just freaked because of his BEAUTIFUL HAIR and you drew him so NICE and GAAAAH *dies*
... Can't wait for more! 8D
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!!!!!
I can't wait 'till the next one. you should write your own comic.
Seriously, some of your stuff's better than most pro's I've seen.
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