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Coral-Draws [2017-07-23 14:00:24 +0000 UTC]

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i think this is really good but a few parts set it off and sort of spoil the atmosphere


the eyes are crossed in a way that can't be possible and they are looking in an awkward direction.
the neck is very long and the chin is over-pointed
i think the nose is off (like very to the left and high-up)and a solution to that would be a face grid
i think the hair is weird in some places
other than that i really like the piece and the colors
keep improving!
i really like your art a lot!

bye

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BasketAiger [2017-07-17 16:16:39 +0000 UTC]

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So overall this is good but I see some things that I think need improvement:

The shading isn't very visible in some places and should be more obvious if you made it darker, especially on the hoodie. However I really like how you shaded the hair.

The red lineart in some places l doesn't really look like it fits in with the face and I think you could improve it by making the lineart black like you did for the majority of the piece.

However, the hair is detailed and well drawn and shaded. The proportions are good and aren't too exaggerated. I like how you drew the eyes and hoodie. Over all, this is good!

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strike-sprinkles [2017-07-17 01:49:32 +0000 UTC]

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oKAY SO
overall, this piece is really good! bUT there are a few things I could point out

-I'm pretty sure this is just something you do with your style but maybe try adding whites in the eyes?

-The shading on the skin (basically the shading under the head) could be a bit warmer of a color. I know that's not the real color of shadows on skin, but since the drawing is two-dimensional and there's not a lot of shading on the piece overall, I think a warmer tone would give the character more life. Also maybe adding a bit of highlight to the eyes would add more life.

-The shading on the clothes should be a bit darker and less saturated because it's a bit hard to see at first

-(last thing lmao) The red airbrush on the lineart looks a bit too dramatic, maybe try using a lighter tone with the red.

I'M SORRY IF THAT SOUNDED LIKE I WAS PICKING APART YOUR PIECE BUT I SWEAR I WASN'T BECAUSE THERE ARE A LOT OF AMAZING THINGS ABOUT THIS PIECE

like, the head shape, the proportions, the clothing, hair, lineart, all looks great!

I hope you didn't find this offensive bc you forced me to do this lmao

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Silvosaurus [2017-07-19 04:48:44 +0000 UTC]

am not good at critiqueusue

appologiies

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starIightt [2017-07-17 00:07:06 +0000 UTC]

Ayy cute

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NightmareTilda [2017-07-16 23:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Really cute

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