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paullanky [2023-02-19 05:35:20 +0000 UTC]
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vinikz [2022-09-26 08:48:56 +0000 UTC]
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arielg7000 [2021-03-26 09:42:52 +0000 UTC]
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AromanticLittleShit [2016-10-24 01:43:19 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! Really you should make a sequel!
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raider37 [2014-11-10 10:10:24 +0000 UTC]
Will We get a sequel? I know Id love it
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abused-toy [2013-02-08 12:56:02 +0000 UTC]
great work
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LatexBitch [2012-11-18 14:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I love it. It is exactly the fantasy I wished to be happening on me
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Mr-Timeshadow [2012-07-05 04:52:46 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...the obvious ending would be that her Mistress planned this as a trap, so that she would effectively punish herself by disobeying. The question is whether her Mistress eventually lets her go, or takes this as proof that she's beyond saving and takes her to auction like this...
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ShadowsDemons [2011-08-05 00:12:21 +0000 UTC]
So can she not see hear speak move or smell?
You shoudl continue this and write what happens when her mistrees comes home. and what hapens after as tehy days go one like what happens to her does she get fluxhed out again?
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RSchenck [2011-06-23 04:50:55 +0000 UTC]
Great story, I keep coming back and rereading it. I do love the ending line.
I can't help but think it would be a great script for a video and I could definitely think of a few potential models to play thie Cindy role.
If you are looking for ideas to extend the story, consider the machine hanging her up on a wall and she can tell there are others with her.
Maybe there are spot lights that turn on an illuminate each "victim" at the completion of each cocooning. Maybe a TV on the wall opposite the girls so they can see themselves. This too would also turn on with the completion of the cycles, The kicker could be the mistress is on the screen too.
I assume she can se out the gas mask?
Maybe the mistress is bringing in one sub an hour, and Cindy can witness each of the following ones falling into the trap
Obviously, The mistres.would have been following the activities on her computer in her sanctuary, and the house would be filled with video cameras.
If you like any of this and want more, I do have a few more ideas to throw at you.
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pepprace In reply to RSchenck [2013-03-19 23:09:18 +0000 UTC]
It would seem that she COULD see out the gas mask: "Cindy's eyes widened with fear", right up until she was put in a bag that was then filled with rubber cement
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SicSlaanesh [2011-05-31 20:17:05 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant
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murphase2 [2011-05-08 19:26:30 +0000 UTC]
Are you going to make pictures that go with this story?
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Doornik1142 In reply to murphase2 [2011-05-08 19:51:33 +0000 UTC]
I would, if I had the artistic talent to do so.
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murphase2 In reply to Doornik1142 [2011-10-16 17:20:25 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you can do it once you get that talent
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Doornik1142 In reply to murphase2 [2011-10-16 18:53:53 +0000 UTC]
I've tried to learn, but I'm impatient by nature and it's hard to get over that.
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watergod159 In reply to Doornik1142 [2011-12-11 06:57:16 +0000 UTC]
You could ask around if any of your allys have spare time to help you out, I would love to see this in picture form
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phantomdotexe [2011-04-20 16:38:07 +0000 UTC]
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UrbanSniper [2011-04-18 22:59:20 +0000 UTC]
So, its curiosity rubberizes the cat, I see, lol. That was a fun read.
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werejaguar [2011-03-15 22:15:57 +0000 UTC]
love this, absoultely love it, this is my fantasy
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werejaguar In reply to Doornik1142 [2011-03-16 13:47:55 +0000 UTC]
I would of had a latex catsuit put on her and then mummified her in latex tape and then sprayed with liquid latex but what you have done with this is close enough and thank you.
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Doornik1142 In reply to werejaguar [2011-03-16 22:13:37 +0000 UTC]
I would have done the latex catsuit but I found it implausible from a physics standpoint. Because of the nature of a catsuit, it's next to impossible to dress someone in it when they're conscious and struggling.
It's like...Have you ever tried to put a sock on without watching what you were doing and the rim of the sock got caught on your little toe? That happened to me one time and it hurt like hell. That's what I thought it would be like if the machine tried to force her into a catsuit.
Point is, I don't think a machine would have the manual dexterity to dress a struggling woman in a catsuit without badly hurting her in the process. She'd probably end up with some broken bones.
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werejaguar In reply to Doornik1142 [2011-03-16 22:20:36 +0000 UTC]
Well I guess that maybe the next victim be wearing one already then?
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werejaguar In reply to Doornik1142 [2011-03-17 13:53:19 +0000 UTC]
Hell I would, in a heart beat, also the person could be knock out with sleeping gas in order to put a catsuit on, no resistance.
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Doornik1142 In reply to werejaguar [2011-03-17 13:59:53 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I don't like stories involving "sleeping gas" or chloroform or the like. It's one of those Hollywood movie cliches that sounds neat on paper but in real life would be extraordinarily dangerous. There's a reason the police don't use sleeping gas to take down criminals. The Russians tried that one time with a bunch of guys who barricaded themselves inside a theater with hundreds of hostages. Everyone in the room died from the gas.
It may seem silly of me to complain about a lack of realism when I write a story about a super auto-bondage machine, but it's just one of those things that breaks my suspension of disbelief.
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werejaguar In reply to Doornik1142 [2011-03-17 14:03:33 +0000 UTC]
Well, how about a hynosis or brainwashing then?
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Doornik1142 In reply to werejaguar [2011-03-17 14:06:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm not opposed to those in principle, but as a rule I prefer when the sub is fully aware of what's happening to her. Also, I didn't want to dip quite that far into the pseudo-science well for this story.
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werejaguar In reply to Doornik1142 [2011-03-17 14:15:27 +0000 UTC]
That's fine, but you can always have willing victims, I would be more than willing to go through the whole process myself.
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tommerch [2011-03-06 07:30:28 +0000 UTC]
I think that it's fine as it is. It's compact and focused.
Thos. Merchant
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