shortidiva19 [2006-02-26 23:01:07 +0000 UTC]
I like all the imagery. But it feels a little forced, leaving it not to flow so well. Maybe you could make it smoother. The rhythm is a bit off.
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ApocalypseUno [2005-03-24 22:17:38 +0000 UTC]
I just love your writing style, In the way you write I can't even start to compete, ! Champion