Comments: 9
DoZo In reply to ebonysoul [2007-02-02 13:51:09 +0000 UTC]
It's a scary thought, let me assure you.
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blurcecy [2006-11-30 11:20:35 +0000 UTC]
creo que a ese hombre al que todos aman, no es el verdadero vos (en caso de que estés hablando de vos, no sé si es así, tal vez hiciste un uso de la primera persona para meter al lector mas en el "cuentín")
me parece interesante porque estás describiendo a un niño interno distinto... el niño interno en este caso está asustado y siempre se supone que es divertido y hace "niñadas"
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XanderORelliy [2006-11-29 23:04:42 +0000 UTC]
The keyboard is always a good place to vent your frustrations. You can feel the depth of the words when you read this allowed, and I could feel the frustration through them. Hope everything gets better for you and you are happy again.
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DoZo In reply to XanderORelliy [2006-11-30 22:25:12 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I'm almost better already... is it too confusing? I kind of feel that my english got a bit messed up there...
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XanderORelliy In reply to DoZo [2006-12-02 16:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Nah I don't think your English was messed up..I think you did fine
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