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DoZo — The Doubt

Published: 2006-07-12 02:13:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 223; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description It's an ocean of shadows, opening in front of me
a storming sea of doubts, wether or not to take the risk
crossing it would mean definition, to make up my mind
and that's what I'm really afraid of...

Fearing to look you in the eye
Afraid of what your words could mean to me

I wasn't looking for anyone, really, escaping from the world
I wasn't hiding either, for that's what a coward does
And there you showed up, with the perfect smile,
the right word... And made me ache for being there.
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Comments: 13

EstrellaFugaz [2006-07-31 21:35:36 +0000 UTC]

god i loved it......hit home. i loved the phrase "crossing would mean definition"......

si me pegaste bajo....un poquito.

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DoZo In reply to EstrellaFugaz [2006-08-06 13:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Si, esa es la idea... pero supongo que pasa más por pegarme bajo en mi propia cobardía.
Quien alguna vez se sintiese intimidado por el hecho de tomar decisiones... Se verá identificado!

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Rauren-u [2006-07-24 06:56:16 +0000 UTC]

I can really sense the deep thought coming from this, the hallow feeling and yet the swelling of emotions all at once like swirling rapids of dark reveries..

I love it. ^_^

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DoZo In reply to Rauren-u [2006-07-24 21:28:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah, always leaving me like a fool with your deep comments... that end up being even better than the poetry they're describing! hot damn!

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Rauren-u In reply to DoZo [2006-07-24 22:41:07 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* I don't think so, I could never better my better-half.

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DoZo In reply to Rauren-u [2006-07-28 04:20:24 +0000 UTC]

*blinks* nah, come on! We both know I'm not your better half! ...Maybe the worse half...

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ebonysoul [2006-07-23 00:32:33 +0000 UTC]

aww!! that's beautiful!! I luv it! Imagery is amazing, and the pic isn't that bad!! ^^

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DoZo In reply to ebonysoul [2006-07-24 21:31:31 +0000 UTC]

It's really funny... because this is an old pic... From the times of "Wet". And it was left stored in my email, and for some odds of fate, it got corrupted and grained in the worse of ways.
So I had to add a little blur to eliminate the noise! ¬_¬
Really annoying, let me tell you.

Anyway! So glad you like it!

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ebonysoul In reply to DoZo [2006-07-26 17:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, luv it!! ^^

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blurcecy [2006-07-12 11:43:02 +0000 UTC]

me encantó la metáfora de definir algo...
se ve como un precipicio, es verdad.... uno cree que va a salir todo mal...

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DoZo In reply to blurcecy [2006-07-13 17:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Si, bueno... al final, por no decidirme... me fue todo bastante mal.
O si me decidí?

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blurcecy In reply to DoZo [2006-07-13 17:49:24 +0000 UTC]

yyyyy eso lo sabrá usted señor...
por el escrito parece que te hicieron hacerte decidir a la fuerza... apareció alguien y zas!

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DoZo In reply to blurcecy [2006-07-13 17:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, pero las decisiones a la fuerza no son nunca bien tomadas...! O si...?

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