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DoZo — The Wall of Fog
Published: 2006-11-06 05:27:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Men and women stoodin front of the wall of fog
that had appeared in town.
They asked themselves how
and Why would this wall
block their vision.
The first brave man
walked on forth, and through
and he was never seen again.
What was there?
A ridge or Garden of Eden?
They couldn't tell.
No one would tell them.
So they feared, and avoided
the wall of fog with caution.
Curious ones, young ones,
wouldn't stand the intrigue and
jump right through.
And they were never seen again.
People would talk about
the unknown, and their fear
would grow. So some old ones
would grow tired of the same
boring life, and walk through
And they were never seen again.
A greater fall, or garden of Eden,
fearful ones would never find out.
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Comments: 7
ooh, very interesting concept! I like it a lot! ^^
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Well, must admit... you're the first one to comment something like that about this piece. It's kinda... misunderstood, quite often.
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that if I don't mention the DEATH concept at the beginning of the piece, not a whole lot of people would get it... and think it's just the usual delusion.
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oh, well those people just aren't as smart as us
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Thank you.
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