C10artfan [2016-02-02 08:02:12 +0000 UTC]
The issue with these three parts is your English making it rather hard to make out what is going on, from what I gathered it was a very good premise but the English really let's it down. I'd recommend talking to a few of the regular writers on here for help with your English.
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