ASomberFox [2017-09-20 23:20:14 +0000 UTC]
I really do like the fire, but there are a few improvements, you have the color and glow down perfectly, and the fire leading to Jen's paw is masterfully done, but the fire on Jen's left paw is a little too dispersed, the strokes are the rights shape, but they need to be more dense, maybe adding more stroke strokes but wider and also lower in opacity. Now I am just going to assume that the light spot in the ground is just a simple quick highlight, but you can easily make it into a ring of fire, by putting some flames on the edge going in.
But anyways, another beautiful piece! Keep up the good work!
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Dragnohar In reply to ASomberFox [2017-09-20 23:28:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the criticism! ^^ The ring of fire thing is just supposed to make the picture more interesting, I was thinking about making it a ring of fire, though! Thanks :]
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