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DragonDodo — Quick doodle animation

Published: 2013-06-02 16:48:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 762; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description Hmm, I don't think this wolf understands he's meant to be accelerating downwards XD
And he shrinks about halfway through, whoops! Probably should have been using layers to keep the proportions accurate...
I probably won't finish this one, it's got too much wrong with it ^^ Unless you guys would like to se it finished?

art and anim ~ me

Critique of the movement apart from the things I know about (see above) very welcome!
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Comments: 16

MADlSASTER [2013-06-03 15:32:09 +0000 UTC]

woah!!! this is really great and smooth! I love it ;w;

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DragonDodo In reply to MADlSASTER [2013-06-03 16:18:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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MADlSASTER In reply to DragonDodo [2013-06-09 13:37:15 +0000 UTC]

no problems!!!~

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Schmengee [2013-06-02 19:55:57 +0000 UTC]

it would be awesome to see this finished one thing at the end, though: he just stops moving his legs and doesnt absorb the shock from jumoing down, just add a couple frames of his legs bending then pushing back up so he's standing

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DragonDodo In reply to Schmengee [2013-06-03 06:53:37 +0000 UTC]

A few people have picked up on the non squishiness of his legs, so I'm definitely going to fix that Thank you!

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Schmengee In reply to DragonDodo [2013-06-04 23:56:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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ThisAccountIsDead462 [2013-06-02 18:41:13 +0000 UTC]

I hope you don't mind me giving you a little criticism. ouo
Perhaps you should reduce to amount of frames as the wolf's falling, to make it look faster. Also, if you made the wolf crouch more just as it hits the ground, it would give it more weight and life. And maybe do the same slightly with the back legs too, as they seem to stop very suddenly once in contact with the ground. o^o
Very good so far though! Lovely and smooth. I love how to tail comes down later than the body, showing it's light weight in comparison, as well as how one leg hits the ground first rather than both, which makes it more life-like and fluid. ^u^

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DragonDodo In reply to ThisAccountIsDead462 [2013-06-03 06:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Of course I don't mind a little criticism
A few people have picked up on the non squishiness of his legs, so I'm definitely going to fix that Thank you!

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ThisAccountIsDead462 In reply to DragonDodo [2013-06-03 15:31:22 +0000 UTC]

It's no problem! I'm glad I could help. ^u^

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Liketheisland In reply to ThisAccountIsDead462 [2013-06-02 22:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Dammit, you beat me to the punch.

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KirikoWindgeist [2013-06-02 18:22:17 +0000 UTC]

this looks amazing so far ^^

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DragonDodo In reply to KirikoWindgeist [2013-06-02 20:14:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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KirikoWindgeist In reply to DragonDodo [2013-06-02 20:17:02 +0000 UTC]

n^^

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YusenxAkuro [2013-06-02 16:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Personally I would love to see this finished.

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DragonDodo In reply to YusenxAkuro [2013-06-02 17:06:52 +0000 UTC]

maybe I will then, once I have some more time

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YusenxAkuro In reply to DragonDodo [2013-06-02 17:11:04 +0000 UTC]

^^ i could also see you making a pay to use base out of it, it really is amazing.

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