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Published: 2012-01-10 17:41:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 306; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 10
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Description I'll move this to scraps later.

Gone:

I am desperatly trying to find my way,
Trying to find my reason to live.
No way anyone cares for me,
I have all these feelings I don't understand...
What is it?
Loneliness?
Hate?
Depression?
Sadness?
Why is this all I feel? It doesn't make sense.
Why can't I be happy?
Why does life take that happiness away?
I rather live my life feeling nothing, this pain is too much to bear.
Someone please help me..
I'm trapped, I living within my own confusion and suffering.
I need someone to rescue me, before I have to rescue myself from this world..
Who would care anyways?
I'm a stain on this world, I'm just causing others pain.
Should I just end my suffering and everyone else's?
That seems to be the easiest way out.
But oh how complicated it is.
Half of me believes I should take my life, save myself from suffering,
But the other half is hopeful.
But that hope is fading slowly.
I can't decide.
Am I insane for having these thoughts?
Or is it everyone is insane for living in this world?
I'll find out soon enough...
I guess I can't be rescued.
Since no one really cares.
I'm just a emotional mess.
A mess that no one bothers to help clean up.
I pray these aren't my last words.
But the slight glimmer of hope has faded to black.
The hope is gone, so am I.

Art,Arya&Poem(c)*DragonessArya /Me
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Comments: 7

motoneko6 [2012-01-19 21:54:24 +0000 UTC]

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my lord! this is absolutely stunning! the mixture of the poem and the drawing is excellently crafted.

i love the hybrid (or furry), the mixture of the reptilian tail/wings, the human hair, and the wolf-like structure flows together in a smooth fashion.

try to work on your outlining. a thinner marker would do. also, the legs need some perspective, i can't see the second hind leg behind the first one, and this creature is in a crawling position.

for the wounds on the face, knees, and paws, try using the brighter shade of red that you used for the back injury, it seems to fit more perfectly, and makes it look like the creature is suffering more.


i love this deviantation! keep up the excellent work!

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A7XSparx [2012-01-11 20:22:53 +0000 UTC]

This time the blood looks GREAT! ^0^

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DragonessArya In reply to A7XSparx [2012-01-11 21:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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birthdaygurl08 [2012-01-10 22:33:12 +0000 UTC]

Omg... i felt this way from my "depression problem" and felt of ending it all. I made my mother cry and she was upset, then i got medicine and i got better. U need to keep moving foward... I care about u

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DragonessArya In reply to birthdaygurl08 [2012-01-11 21:51:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~

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birthdaygurl08 In reply to DragonessArya [2012-01-12 01:04:28 +0000 UTC]

of course no prob

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NotXRAY0128 [2012-01-10 17:55:32 +0000 UTC]

'tis an awesome sketch

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