Comments: 9
hush3193 [2008-05-15 00:40:41 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful! Do continue writing please.
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Maxteg [2008-03-27 19:17:45 +0000 UTC]
For your first story that was phenominal! Great job!
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choirsinger234 [2008-01-03 05:14:07 +0000 UTC]
it was awsome. go into details about thease two. make have sex. it would be very romantic.
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Satin-Chrysalis [2008-01-03 05:03:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is really great. Great scene and description. I felt her pleasure and the excitement of the risk. Well done with descriptions, I could see his hands moving into her panties very easily.
Only one gotcha. Couple times you mean "through" instead of "threw".
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DragonEyesSoul In reply to Satin-Chrysalis [2008-01-03 05:08:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Satin, and thanks for the correction, I'll watch out for that next time = )
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DragonEyesSoul [2008-01-03 04:40:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
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