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Published: 2014-05-09 03:33:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 192; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description At least a poor attempt at his character honestly I'm not improving I might just discontinue drawing...
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TwigKing [2014-07-05 09:34:09 +0000 UTC]

alright so the thing yes
well i think this is a beautiful piece of artwork you have here definitely one of my favorites of your gallery.
but i think you need to adjust the head since to me at least it is too small for the body so if you made it bigger than it would be great!
for the legs which i see this a lot in your artwork is they don't really have anatomy but you know what helps? references! those are basically the key to almost every problem you have in drawing i suggest looking for paw pictures on google or here on dA they are very helpful! and if you are having trouble finding some you can go into my favs and look for the tutorials folder and i am sure you will find some great ones!
and one other thing about the body is that it should be slightly bigger unless the character has that short of a tail.
for those bows, it looks like they are flowing in the wind, if they are i suggest put some sort of curl in them to not make them look straight and stiff, bows should flow in the wind other than being stiff.
for the background, i think you could've done some more with it maybe add thicker clouds or more color if you do then it would be a much more colorful picture which would make people click on the picture to check it out!
well this is all i can see in this so hope this helps! remember use references!

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