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DragonLuver99 — SolluxXReader?Eridan Insert Part 1
Published: 2013-03-02 06:43:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1795; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 8
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Description You walked down the hallway of your school. Filled thick with kids of all sizes. Some noticeable, and some not so noticeable. You were one of the not so noticeable ones.
Your name is (first name), (last name) and you are kind of a loner here at this school. You had friends, yes. Though, none of them would actually come over your house and what not. Except one really.  To tell you the truth, you didn’t really want them to anyway. Your room was always a mess from the cosplays, drawing supplies, and just a load of crap that was always on the floor or your desk. You also tend to adore your privacy. Those are the main reasons.
Anyway, back to what I was saying. You were walking down the hallway in your black coat, (type of jeans) jeans, and converse with your backpack on your back. You glance to your right as you walk by and see one of your friends. Wait… scratch that. Your best friend. Nepeta Lejion. She has been there for you thick and thin, and offered you any advice, and offered to have multiple feelings jams. And you have done the same in return. Since 1st grade it has been like this with her. To be completely honest, she was probably the nicest, and best person that has ever been in your life. Even against your parents…
Nepeta puts on a big smiles squealing, “ (Name)! (Name)! I thought of some more purrfect ships!”
You smirked at her use of cat puns and her typical shipping routine. She had always had a strange attraction towards cats ever since she was little. You both would play games on how many, and how long you could use puns that had something to do with your favorite animal. You chose dogs (because that’s a usual 1st grade favorite animal) and hers was obviously cats. She has never really stopped using them. If she still thinks this is a game… then she is a god for keeping it up for that long without losing. You use your dog puns once and a while though.
You chuckled and sighed jokingly, “ What is it this time?”
Nepeta just squealed again and asked,” You know that one kid named Eridan?”
Oh yes… you knew Eridan too well… he was very irritating but you seemed to be able to put up with him… he seemed very nice to you though. So of course, you were kind back.
“Yeah.” You answered
“You know that nice girl Feferi?!,” she asked rather loudly unable to contain her excitement.
“Oh my gosh Catnep… I guess it would work… but you know me. The queen of gay ships.” You said flipping your hair in a dramatic way.
Nepeta giggled and said,” Yes I know. You make purrfect gay ships.”
“You know it girl.”
~1st Period~
You sat down at your desk a few minutes before class. You got out all the necessary equipment for class, and waited for the bell to ring. Though, you saw someone walk in.
His name was Sollux Captor. He was a really nice guy to you. He was pretty cute too.
He walked over to his desk, seeming rather out of it and sat down. He then noticed you and put on that small cute smile he usually put on when he talked to you, and usually other girls as well.
“Hey (Name) What’th up?” he asked.
“Nothin’ much thup munch. Just waiting for class,” you replied. You and Sollux tend to call each other the weirdest names ever. Though… they seem to fit unexpectedly well.
He laughes slightly at the name.
“Good one thlurp muffin.”
You laughed especially hard at that one. You had the stupidest laugh, and you began to feel a little embarrasses for laughing so hard.
He smiles and he starts to laugh too, and this soon turns into a weird laugh fit between the two of you. He calms down first and says a little too casually,
“Oh haha you’re tho cute when you laugh like that!” he says still giggling like an idiot.
A blush creeps up on your cheeks, and thank god the bell rang at that exact moment or things would’ve been VERY awkward…
The teacher started ranting on about the lesson, but you couldn’t help but keep thinking about what he said.
Does he really think I’m cute?
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Comments: 36

flippin-nuggets-25 [2013-07-23 17:49:56 +0000 UTC]

do you have part 3 i need iiiittttttt


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DragonLuver99 In reply to flippin-nuggets-25 [2013-08-23 02:36:28 +0000 UTC]

(im sorry this is so late) and uh no part three ^_^""" sorry! not yet at least. I have no idea when Im going to write it. Probably no time soon.. im sorry Dx and im assuming you still arent looking for part two then? x3 im glad you enjoy it though <33

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flippin-nuggets-25 In reply to DragonLuver99 [2013-08-23 15:04:28 +0000 UTC]

yes it is okay

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flippin-nuggets-25 [2013-07-23 17:42:30 +0000 UTC]

wher is part two i cant find it aahhhhhhhhhhh

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SkylordBelle [2013-03-11 00:13:43 +0000 UTC]

I DEMAND AN ERIDANXREADER

pwease

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DragonLuver99 In reply to SkylordBelle [2013-03-11 20:34:04 +0000 UTC]

haha ill probably make this one split off or something xD

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BubblyMustaches [2013-03-04 15:10:25 +0000 UTC]

haha yes the queen of gay ships!! >:33 love how you included that in there. fudgeeeeee creamsicles i cant type while laying down i fudge every other word up.... >.< anywho heres a tip. i noticed when you post stories on here that it fudges up your format. to help you you can preview it when you are posting and make sure there is one clear space in between every paragraph. you also need to make huge indents. hit the preview button every now and then to see if its turning out right. its a HUGE pain in the buttocks. whale happy writing!

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DragonLuver99 In reply to BubblyMustaches [2013-03-11 20:34:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks hurr trolololo typing a small message back

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SilentGemini [2013-03-03 09:06:47 +0000 UTC]

<--- turns to ---> more?

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DragonLuver99 In reply to SilentGemini [2013-03-11 20:35:17 +0000 UTC]

i cant believe you guys like this xD thanks! Ill be sure to right more ^_^

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SilentGemini In reply to DragonLuver99 [2013-03-12 01:19:25 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!

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animelovein [2013-03-02 21:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! Cute!!!! MORE!!!!

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DragonLuver99 In reply to animelovein [2013-03-03 02:59:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks! and okay!

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animelovein In reply to DragonLuver99 [2013-03-10 21:04:40 +0000 UTC]

yayyyyyyyy

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superluckystar [2013-03-02 18:00:59 +0000 UTC]

I pick.... BOTH HEHHEHEHE! I love this story and I am undecided to have a harem with both or only one of them . Hmmm. ( though I don't like yaoi. No offense to anyone who does)

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DragonLuver99 In reply to superluckystar [2013-03-11 20:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you no offense taken. I shouldnt have mentioned anything about yaoi or whatever considering a lot of people dislike yaoi pretty stronly. Ill try my best to be less descriptive of the readers personality ^_^
thanks again ;o;

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superluckystar In reply to DragonLuver99 [2013-03-14 23:58:35 +0000 UTC]

No probs! Though I dont really have a problem with yaoi. It's just the mentioning of it is really everywhere. It just gets old a little seeing yaoi in some things I like Especially Homestuck. Though again not offending anyone.

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MistiGears [2013-03-02 17:54:07 +0000 UTC]

sollux x reader
sollux x reader
you can always have it split in the middle or something, like a one-choice choose your path?

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DragonLuver99 In reply to MistiGears [2013-03-11 20:35:37 +0000 UTC]

thats a great idea o: i think im doing that

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Crazylight36 [2013-03-02 14:52:21 +0000 UTC]

How did you know I have a stupid weird laught?

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Darkangelof2P [2013-03-02 14:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Lemme just say that you couldn't have portrayed the reader any more like me because whoa it's me im the school loner and my room is literally the pit of hell. I have very few friends that I talk to so yeah. You spyin' on me or somethin'? lol


And now for the real reason im commenting, I just wanted to know if you needed a beta reader? You did good with your first fic but there are somethings that are a little bit of a writing no no. No offense at all ... I don't like making people feel bad. Just wanted to know and wow this is getting long no.

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DragonLuver99 In reply to Darkangelof2P [2013-03-02 16:50:58 +0000 UTC]

haha im glad I got you exactly. Im outside your window right now xD

Um... yes I would much appriciate a beta reader ^_^
What did I put in there that wasnt very fitting? I dont take naything offensive ^_^ Im just glad that your honest with me <3

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Darkangelof2P In reply to DragonLuver99 [2013-03-02 20:03:23 +0000 UTC]

your welcome and i have a roof window. Does that even work?

You have a few spelling mistakes and some s's that make things plural when it shouldn't, nothing to bad. Also some words that mess up the sentence or just make it harder to understand. I really like the story btw. I cant wait for the rest. It's also really cool since i just started beta reading and im really excited!

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sarcasticHoarder [2013-03-02 12:59:18 +0000 UTC]

No I'm no queen of gayness. I hate yaoi. No offense.

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DragonLuver99 In reply to sarcasticHoarder [2013-03-02 16:47:52 +0000 UTC]

No offense taken ^_^

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sarcasticHoarder In reply to DragonLuver99 [2013-03-02 18:56:07 +0000 UTC]

XP

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UniGirl11 [2013-03-02 12:43:50 +0000 UTC]

I am so NOT the queen of gay ships. I don't have ONE.

But hey, I like your story. I vote for the Sollux x Reader x Eridan.

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DragonLuver99 In reply to UniGirl11 [2013-03-02 16:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh sorry bout that D:
and thanks for voting ^_^ glad you like it!

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DreamBones [2013-03-02 07:54:25 +0000 UTC]

For your fist fanfic I think it´s pretty good! I like it ^^

And I vote for a Sollux x Reader x Eridan, can´t help it, I looove that combination XD

But hey, it will be fine too with Sollux x Reader close friend Eridan, I don´t mind~

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DragonLuver99 In reply to DreamBones [2013-03-02 16:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! means a lot from you guys >o<
i think im gonna do a sollux x reader x eridan, cuz it seems everybody wants that xD lol

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stridersgonnastride4 [2013-03-02 07:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Sollux thinks im cute?.......
030 my prayers have been answered

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DragonLuver99 In reply to stridersgonnastride4 [2013-03-02 16:46:04 +0000 UTC]

haha right?

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stridersgonnastride4 In reply to DragonLuver99 [2013-03-02 17:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Yesh X3

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DragonLuver99 In reply to stridersgonnastride4 [2013-03-03 02:58:19 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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MagicianOfTheMoon [2013-03-02 07:26:32 +0000 UTC]

a Sollux x Reader x Eridan would be amazing! But I'm sure whichever path you end up taking with this will be awesome anyway uwu also this is great for your first submitted fic

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DragonLuver99 In reply to MagicianOfTheMoon [2013-03-02 16:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! <3 seems to me everybody wants Sollux x Reader X eridan xD

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