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DragonsChest — SHE WAITED
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Published: 2013-10-24 03:31:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 381; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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This poem is a collaborative work between myself and my wonderful friend Nilla.Artwork by
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Comments: 14
Oh wow, I really loved this poem...it has such a melancholy beauty that pulled at my heart...
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It does my hear good to hear you day this, as this poem took a lot of emotion out of me to write it...
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It shows too! 
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Goodness... fabulous! But fabulously sad and emotive, the way it was intended, so I should say successful.
And I do like the form of repeating the first line, for the last line. It really does give it that extra power, and leaves you really thinking.
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Thank you Tea. I learned, from the French, how repetition can enhance poetry and give it something more. I am glad you like this...
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Very sad, although so very beautiful at the same, David!
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You're most welcome, dear David.
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This is truly my pleasure...
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