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Published: 2009-06-07 05:16:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1166; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 34
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Description Ah, the many sides of Toph.

This drawing is for
~Quatre4 requested a Toph drawing for winning contest 9 part B at ~Avatards-Anonymous .

I'm happy with the way this came out. (rare for me)
I hope you enjoy it as well.

Colored pencil and black ink pen on paper. I don't own Avatar: The Last Airbender or this character. I make no profit from this drawing.
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Comments: 18

Golden-Flute [2009-06-07 06:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Your shading and detail on her robe is spectacular! I don't have that type of patience! Her proportions are awesome as well!

The style you use is very original as well and Toph appears like a very mature young lady.

The one piece of critique I am going to give is the profile in the left needs a little bit of reconstruction. The brow is just a little too high in comparison to the eyebrows and the jaw protrudes a little more than would normally on Toph's face.

Other than that, this is a very nice, original piece! Good work!

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dragonstar10 In reply to Golden-Flute [2009-06-07 15:03:49 +0000 UTC]

First off, thank you so much! This is the first critique I've received since the new format was introduced. I incredibly appreciate it!
Thank you for the compliment on shading. It's all layers upon layers of color, until I achieve the results I desire. I always worry I'll go too far or not far enough.
I knew there was something bothering me about the profile but I couldn't put my finger on it. I see now it's definitely the chin.
Thank you again! You're the best!

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Golden-Flute In reply to dragonstar10 [2009-06-07 15:54:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad my critique helped you! I always worry about those things! I know you a little bit, so I knew you'd be okay, but for others, you never know if they will think your critique is too harsh, or put too harshly!

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dragonstar10 In reply to Golden-Flute [2009-06-07 19:41:33 +0000 UTC]

The way you put everything was just right. I wouldn't worry about giving strangers critiques, yours are worded wonderfully!

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Golden-Flute In reply to dragonstar10 [2009-06-08 01:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! I'm glad they don't suck!

You know what's ironic... you're giving me critiques about critiquing!

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dragonstar10 In reply to Golden-Flute [2009-06-08 14:14:43 +0000 UTC]


I thought about that when I was writing it.

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Naomi--chan [2010-02-15 10:35:47 +0000 UTC]

she's pretty!

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dragonstar10 In reply to Naomi--chan [2010-04-05 06:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Naomi--chan In reply to dragonstar10 [2010-04-22 08:45:45 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome !

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Beshflorin [2010-01-10 23:44:32 +0000 UTC]

Toph is a beifong beauty

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dragonstar10 In reply to Beshflorin [2010-01-11 04:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Agreed! Thanks.

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TwilightShaman [2010-01-10 10:29:44 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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dragonstar10 In reply to TwilightShaman [2010-01-10 15:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TwilightShaman In reply to dragonstar10 [2010-01-11 10:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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magnumkiyoshi [2010-01-10 04:14:02 +0000 UTC]

Thats super cute!

--
Cyborg: OOOH!! You know what would be fun? Let's all go out for WAFFLES! RAVEN!! You like WAFFLES, DON'TCHA?
Raven: (Deadpan) More than life itself.

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dragonstar10 In reply to magnumkiyoshi [2010-01-10 05:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

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Jthegymnast [2010-01-10 00:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Very cute, I love the coloring and her smile especially

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dragonstar10 In reply to Jthegymnast [2010-01-10 05:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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