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Drakebloedje — Touch
Published: 2005-07-16 12:00:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 332; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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So far I have been walking, among the people who don’t stop talkingAbout things they don’t understand, even when I try to explain
For now, I’ll let them be, I can’t help it to them
They have to see, see it for themselves
Feelings only hurt, are confusing
Naïve, we all are, abusing
We say we know, but we can’t show
What’s knowledge, if most of it is a black hole?
Still
So many things hidden well deep
And so much we want to keep
To ourselves, something we don’t want to share
And we all agree, that’s fair
Still
Holding a flower, we can’t say nor explain
How it feels to touch
The feeling is something we can’t receive
Through words
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Comments: 12
I really like this poem! One suggestion though, because you carry on some indeas into new lines, don't start them with a captial letter, they aren't a new thought, they are continuations of one.
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Thanks for the fav ^^
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What a powerful poem! Nice choice of words! The ending really got me going! BEAUTIFUL!
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The poem did a good job at sending out a couple little messages which I like, it's good for a poem to have meaning. I also like how you ended it.
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wow 
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Thank you -is amazed-
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