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I tried visualizing this: soundcloud.com/monstercat/deonβ¦
Please also comment if there is something wrong with the shadings or colors. Much appreciated it!
Took a crash course for drawing oceans rip, it looks bad, and some objects.
EDIT: after getting on stops, I have taken your suggestions guys and fixed some of the perspective and flat detail problems, theres still some so keep em coming
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This is super cool 
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Its pretty nerve wracking if many are wrong, it falls apart. many of the things here are wrong, which I am very disappointed at XD. I will be planning to return to making more of these, since doing some wweird OC concepts is not my niche
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I can appreciate that approach, I just need to practice more when it comes to placing the character in the frame of the background.
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Hi there, I am dropping in from
I think it was brave of you to tackle a large scene like this with so many intricate details. I like the accessories that you included on the cabinet--they tell a story about the character!
You have a nice setup, but I think that the message is getting confused a bit by the color palette in the foreground. I am getting a sense of foreboding by the dark sky and smoke stack in the window, but the color palette in the room itself is so cheery. If you wanted to carry on that sense of uneasiness into the foreground , you could desaturate the colors and make the environment a bit more dark. It would give more contrast and would make the window and the figure that it surrounds stand out. As is, the green of the floor and the purple robe are pulling the attention away from the character, who I assume is the focal point. By changing the colors, I think you would have a more clear message of how the viewer is supposed to feel when looking at the picture.
Another thing you might fix is the perspective on the tub. I think it could use a slight adjustment, particularly on the right hand side, as it looks just a tad too low.
I hope that what I have said makes sense. Keep up the great work!
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Thanks for the feedback, I intended the art to have no focus at all(for me), but I guess it might be better itf there might be a a subject to focus on. Im still getting around the saturation thing and i have been researching it on how it affects the colors. Thanks for the tips from the colors also especially how it can affect the attention.
Theres alot more to learn from what i know
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Super cute! I hope the thing I sent you about perspective is helping, there is definitely an improvement!
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Gonna try to fix the perspectives later, road trip turbulence are a pain hehe
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I want this as a hawaiian hotel room!
Or at least the bathroom...
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The end of the bathtub is a bit slanted in the corner and the dimensions of some 3D objects are a bit weird, but it's pretty good nonetheless. Better than what I can do.
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I purposely made it like a diamond shaped, but I think the way i drew the diamond was innacurate
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Yeah, I guess. But then again, I'm not much better myself.
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The perspective looks a bit off, but it looks great.
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The perspective and dimensions definitely need some work, and some items scattered around the room look like they've got no depth whatsoever, but it's pretty good other than that!
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It looks a little flat to me :/. Nice design, though
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