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Published: 2009-05-07 21:11:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2991; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 24
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Well... Some lineart I did.Ohoho~ I like using pencil on top of ink now~ XD
New character: Laviss
He used to live in the northern country of Bithern before the wars. (He's in the same story as Llen.)
He moved south to Maergis for training (he was a young child back then) when the war broke out.
Now that he's older and the war is over, he wants to return to Bithern to find his younger brother (who was born during the war). Apparently, his parents had disappeared and his sibling had been taken away.
This was, of course, in the midst of a new conflict...
Just a brief explanation of his character.
Hmm..... The hands bother me a lot. And so do the shoes and torso. And the hair. BUT, other than that, I think I'm getting used to drawing people (finally!!)
How about the clothes? Am I getting better with the folds? D: D:
Colored version will be posted right after this~~
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Comments: 7
the torso is a tad long but everything else is fine. The shoes are epic, do not change them. Love the sword and the pose
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Thanks! 
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This is a pretty neat design! I love how your inks incorporate spot blacks and have the slightest touch of shading with pencil. It really makes the lineart pop out.
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the folds on the pants are great, nice shadowing!
and cool chara design ^^
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How in the world does he do that with his legs? That's what I want to know. Um.. some more specific critique? The right hand looks rather bent backwards or something, so next time have it going the other direction? Also the hands (his left particularly) looks a little loose if he's holding the sword. So, maybe have it look like he's gripping it. Don't forget about the joints in the knuckles. I've been having that problem a lot too. Other than that and the legs, I like this guy. He's quite an interesting character! Nice build so far~
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Nice.
I like it.
I don't know about you, but the shirt just looks weird to me.
But I still like it anyway!
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