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Published: 2008-01-17 03:34:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Is this just a fantasy?
Am I fussing up for something so magical, but it'll never happen for real?
What is it?
I know it's not the pressure you have now
You've always found a way to be near me
But now, I see that you're one step closer to move on
Why did you ask me to be with you if you were going to do this?
Why?
To say that you can have any girl that easily?
You have a lot of them waiting to have a piece of you
Why did you choose me?
Am I one of your experiments?
Don't you think I have feelings?
Don't you think I have eyes to see what is going on?
You're over me
It's obvious
You show more feelings to your friends
But then again, you learned from me
That it's better to show feelings to your friends than to your loved one
That or you think I'll always be there for one night stand
I'm sorry, but I won't be there for that.
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Comments: 9

something44 [2008-01-18 01:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Good poem! Well written! I'm sorry about what happened. You're correct about the getting stronger part, "what doesn't kill you will make you stronger". Anyway, good job!

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dramaticfairywriter In reply to something44 [2008-01-18 01:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah well, I'm not worthy enough for him...and I don't care. I'm better off without him

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FragileReveries [2008-01-17 21:15:37 +0000 UTC]

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dramaticfairywriter In reply to FragileReveries [2008-01-17 21:34:51 +0000 UTC]

yeah well it's all true...I was only an experiment.

But I'll be fine. After what happened, I'll be stronger

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FragileReveries In reply to dramaticfairywriter [2008-01-17 21:50:46 +0000 UTC]

that's exactly what you should be saying

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dramaticfairywriter In reply to FragileReveries [2008-01-17 23:24:23 +0000 UTC]

yeah I know. Besides, I've got my playlist to move on and live free

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FragileReveries In reply to dramaticfairywriter [2008-01-18 20:08:34 +0000 UTC]

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british-doll [2008-01-17 08:34:46 +0000 UTC]

to me it often seems that the people who inspire this kind of writing are the ones who'd never leave you because of it. they're the ones who understand why you write and feel what you do.

Why did you choose me?
Am I one of your experiments?
Don't you think I have feelings?
Don't you think I have eyes to see what is going on?

I love the questions you pose here, but am not sure, because the 2nd line is so much longer than first and third when read aloud, if it might flow better as

Why did you choose me?
Don't you think I have feelings?
Am I one of your experiments?
Don't you think I have eyes to see what is going on?

I dunno. personal opinion, I guess.

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dramaticfairywriter In reply to british-doll [2008-01-17 21:35:27 +0000 UTC]

It does sound better like that, thanks.


Well, in my experience, it does not come out like that, seriously. Recently, he broke up with me.

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